for Art Criticism10/27/2010 c18 ddz008
This was such a great chapter even if so short. I loved that they both showed to each other how much they actually care. This chapter made me feel sad for James and I'm so glad that Yusef is going to be there for him. And he is going with him to the show! I wonder how will Kitty and Peter react?
This was such a great chapter even if so short. I loved that they both showed to each other how much they actually care. This chapter made me feel sad for James and I'm so glad that Yusef is going to be there for him. And he is going with him to the show! I wonder how will Kitty and Peter react?
10/27/2010 c18 
54big.break.and.laryngitis
I cannot even express to you the level of awesomeness at which this story resides. It is just. So fucking awesome. God.
54big.break.and.laryngitisI cannot even express to you the level of awesomeness at which this story resides. It is just. So fucking awesome. God.
10/27/2010 c17 Poptart Guava King
*gives you more wine* oh James you such a beybe. grow some balls and get Turkish back!
*gives you more wine* oh James you such a beybe. grow some balls and get Turkish back!
10/27/2010 c17 ava
This was quite tender! James and his mum I mean, made me want to tear up.
I actually cannot believe Turkish hasn't contacted him again! Turkish is less mature then I thought...
Peter is lovely, i do wonder if he's slightly bi, or if he really views James as his brother, that was some heavy comforting going on!
Melissa was fair, but she really could not have been punishing, james' reaction to seeing semi-naked pictures of himself in public was reasonably appropriate.
If I was Turkish i'd be back in there asap. But is it James who is goingto be 'the bigger man'?
Please keep going, so excited about rapid updates!
This was quite tender! James and his mum I mean, made me want to tear up.
I actually cannot believe Turkish hasn't contacted him again! Turkish is less mature then I thought...
Peter is lovely, i do wonder if he's slightly bi, or if he really views James as his brother, that was some heavy comforting going on!
Melissa was fair, but she really could not have been punishing, james' reaction to seeing semi-naked pictures of himself in public was reasonably appropriate.
If I was Turkish i'd be back in there asap. But is it James who is goingto be 'the bigger man'?
Please keep going, so excited about rapid updates!
10/27/2010 c17 2Abrasive
Reading your author's note has given me a huge craving for wine. Unfortunately, there is none readily available in my home and it's late on a Wednesday night so the liquor stores are all shut. The woes of a wine-less existence.
Anyway - muy rapido update! And James is muy sad...o? (My Spanish is mutilated at its best.) I really enjoy seeing his character develop; it's starting to culminate very nicely and he's finally starting to become a normal human being, or at least, he's recognising things about himself.
Clear and economical, as usual. And, as usual, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
2AbrasiveReading your author's note has given me a huge craving for wine. Unfortunately, there is none readily available in my home and it's late on a Wednesday night so the liquor stores are all shut. The woes of a wine-less existence.
Anyway - muy rapido update! And James is muy sad...o? (My Spanish is mutilated at its best.) I really enjoy seeing his character develop; it's starting to culminate very nicely and he's finally starting to become a normal human being, or at least, he's recognising things about himself.
Clear and economical, as usual. And, as usual, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
10/27/2010 c17 2S. J. Vanne
This story is developing nicely. You have strong characters that are very likable and at times identifiable, for me anyway :P. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
2S. J. VanneThis story is developing nicely. You have strong characters that are very likable and at times identifiable, for me anyway :P. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
10/27/2010 c17 54big.break.and.laryngitis
Peter is hearts.
James is sweet.
I miss Turkish.
Good chapter.
Lame review.
Can't wait for more :)
54big.break.and.laryngitisPeter is hearts.
James is sweet.
I miss Turkish.
Good chapter.
Lame review.
Can't wait for more :)
10/26/2010 c17 8angelalleya
ohmygoodness.
so I've been very lax about reviewing for the last few chapters... I apologize. this story deserves better.
I am so glad to see another chapter so quickly! I was standing in line at chipotle while reading chapter 16 (horrible idea, but I could NOT wait), and I was trying so hard not to outwardly freak out at James.
but, as I think I said before, I see so much of myself in him, and it's kind of scary, haha. maybe I can learn from him and not repeat his mistakes? let's hope.
anyway, just wanted to drop in and tell you how much this story moves me, and how much I totally love the characters. you are awesome :)
one of these days, I'll get around to reading your other stuff. between full time school, full time work, and family obligations, it's a miracle that I can even keep up with this one!
8angelalleyaohmygoodness.
so I've been very lax about reviewing for the last few chapters... I apologize. this story deserves better.
I am so glad to see another chapter so quickly! I was standing in line at chipotle while reading chapter 16 (horrible idea, but I could NOT wait), and I was trying so hard not to outwardly freak out at James.
but, as I think I said before, I see so much of myself in him, and it's kind of scary, haha. maybe I can learn from him and not repeat his mistakes? let's hope.
anyway, just wanted to drop in and tell you how much this story moves me, and how much I totally love the characters. you are awesome :)
one of these days, I'll get around to reading your other stuff. between full time school, full time work, and family obligations, it's a miracle that I can even keep up with this one!
10/26/2010 c17 Driftingtide
Okay wow I'm not a cryer and I was actuslly crying a bit for James here. But at least he has finally calmed down enough to realise that he messed up and has decided to do something about it. At least thats what it seemed like to me.
Okay wow I'm not a cryer and I was actuslly crying a bit for James here. But at least he has finally calmed down enough to realise that he messed up and has decided to do something about it. At least thats what it seemed like to me.
10/26/2010 c17 25Esquirella
James' mom is more awesome than I first thought! And she's right. He does needto tell Turkish. It's the least he can do, and will at least tell Turkish there are reasons behind the walls James has put up. And James better be NICE this time! (LOL! Demanding, aren't I?)
25EsquirellaJames' mom is more awesome than I first thought! And she's right. He does needto tell Turkish. It's the least he can do, and will at least tell Turkish there are reasons behind the walls James has put up. And James better be NICE this time! (LOL! Demanding, aren't I?)
10/26/2010 c17 42Catherine Julia Jefferson
I was so happy to see another chapter so soon! But now I want another one...
42Catherine Julia JeffersonI was so happy to see another chapter so soon! But now I want another one...
10/26/2010 c17 ddz008
Oh! Poor James... but I feel even more sad for Turkish right now. I hope they can forgive each other and go to NYC together T_T I need to read the next chapter soon! :)
Oh! Poor James... but I feel even more sad for Turkish right now. I hope they can forgive each other and go to NYC together T_T I need to read the next chapter soon! :)