for Art Criticism10/17/2012 c24 
4R. Ficst
very cute story. I stayed up way too late reading it though, so I really can't give you a longer review. Good work, and thank you for posting!
4R. Ficstvery cute story. I stayed up way too late reading it though, so I really can't give you a longer review. Good work, and thank you for posting!
9/28/2012 c25 24Dark Lalage
I really loved this story and really felt like I could relate to the characters and loved their interactions and the flow, Thank you for sharing it and I'll look forward to more!
24Dark LalageI really loved this story and really felt like I could relate to the characters and loved their interactions and the flow, Thank you for sharing it and I'll look forward to more!
9/7/2012 c24 Dinosaurs R Dead
OH MY LAWD this was one of the most awesome stories I've ever read :D
Usually I'd try and come up with a more...descriptive and admirable term for a story with such magnificent stature- but either the fact that its late at night or Turkish's adjectives have gotten the better of me...I'm kinda speechless.
Squee!
OH MY LAWD this was one of the most awesome stories I've ever read :D
Usually I'd try and come up with a more...descriptive and admirable term for a story with such magnificent stature- but either the fact that its late at night or Turkish's adjectives have gotten the better of me...I'm kinda speechless.
Squee!
9/3/2012 c24 9JuneSummers
This was really great. I especially love your characters and the slow and steady pace of the story. very well written.
haha maybe you wouldn't mind reading mine now?
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9JuneSummersThis was really great. I especially love your characters and the slow and steady pace of the story. very well written.
haha maybe you wouldn't mind reading mine now?
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8/18/2012 c25 SadEyedLady
I don't even have words to describe how much I adored that. It was sweet, sexy, and very real. The only thing I was dissapointed about was that you didn't have an admission of love before the epilogue, but that is personally just me, and the story was wonderful without it.
I don't even have words to describe how much I adored that. It was sweet, sexy, and very real. The only thing I was dissapointed about was that you didn't have an admission of love before the epilogue, but that is personally just me, and the story was wonderful without it.
8/18/2012 c24 1Voidpoint
I absolutely loved this. It was so dramatic and beautiful, as well as feisty!
1VoidpointI absolutely loved this. It was so dramatic and beautiful, as well as feisty!
8/9/2012 c8 SSooth
I love the description of the middle easterner food. My husband is Persian/Armenian and I had to learn to cook all those dishes from his mother. I couldn't help but smile when you named and descried all those dishes.
Well done! *clap clap clap*
I love the description of the middle easterner food. My husband is Persian/Armenian and I had to learn to cook all those dishes from his mother. I couldn't help but smile when you named and descried all those dishes.
Well done! *clap clap clap*
7/13/2012 c24 saywhattt
Can't believe I haven't reviewed this story yet!
I loved it! The characters are so well formed, you can clearly follow the progression.
I would've like to see Turkish view of things a little more and some more background on James' life before SanFran. Also, it would be cool to see how/why James and Peter stayed friends. You could tell that they're tight but I never really understood why? IDk if that makes sense.
Anywho fantastic story really enjoyed this one!
Can't believe I haven't reviewed this story yet!
I loved it! The characters are so well formed, you can clearly follow the progression.
I would've like to see Turkish view of things a little more and some more background on James' life before SanFran. Also, it would be cool to see how/why James and Peter stayed friends. You could tell that they're tight but I never really understood why? IDk if that makes sense.
Anywho fantastic story really enjoyed this one!
7/1/2012 c24 nothing.else.is
LOVE this story! I want there to be 10 more chapters so I can read about everything - like when they first said 'I love you' to each other. And everything else. I am totally favoriting this fic.
LOVE this story! I want there to be 10 more chapters so I can read about everything - like when they first said 'I love you' to each other. And everything else. I am totally favoriting this fic.
6/1/2012 c24 chowdizzle
So I was creeping your tumblr and I saw that you posted some excerpts of a sekwel (ignore the bad spelling.. I'm on my phone and I spilled some soy sauce on it so now that letter doesn't work so I'm trying to write it somewhat phonetically). Anyways pls do write a sekwel I love these characters so much that I want more of them!
So I was creeping your tumblr and I saw that you posted some excerpts of a sekwel (ignore the bad spelling.. I'm on my phone and I spilled some soy sauce on it so now that letter doesn't work so I'm trying to write it somewhat phonetically). Anyways pls do write a sekwel I love these characters so much that I want more of them!
5/4/2012 c20 Catalina
Oh my god this os literally one of the best pieces of slash fiction on fictionpress. I just keep coming back to it again and again and again. Actually, I do that with most of your stories. I have no idea why I haven't reviewed before actually. Why isn't there a sequel? I'd love to see more James and Turkish, though to be honest I can see them not working out eventually. Like, it seems like they'd have a great time for a few years but ultimately end up going different places. Maybe I'm completely wrong, I dunno!
I was really bored in math class the other day and was talking to a friend who also read it and we agreed that James and Peter should run off together and leave Arie and Turkish all pretty and upset and in need of comfort. But now that I think on it that's a terrible idea. Anyways, just wanted to say you're extremely talented and thanks for producing a great piece of writing!
P.S. You know that's not what Invisible Cities is about, right? All of the stories are about Venice. I couldn't tell if you were doing something REALLY clever with what Turkish said or if you just didn't understand.
Oh my god this os literally one of the best pieces of slash fiction on fictionpress. I just keep coming back to it again and again and again. Actually, I do that with most of your stories. I have no idea why I haven't reviewed before actually. Why isn't there a sequel? I'd love to see more James and Turkish, though to be honest I can see them not working out eventually. Like, it seems like they'd have a great time for a few years but ultimately end up going different places. Maybe I'm completely wrong, I dunno!
I was really bored in math class the other day and was talking to a friend who also read it and we agreed that James and Peter should run off together and leave Arie and Turkish all pretty and upset and in need of comfort. But now that I think on it that's a terrible idea. Anyways, just wanted to say you're extremely talented and thanks for producing a great piece of writing!
P.S. You know that's not what Invisible Cities is about, right? All of the stories are about Venice. I couldn't tell if you were doing something REALLY clever with what Turkish said or if you just didn't understand.
5/3/2012 c24 3Sayure
Wow thanks, YaY my " 1st finished story" and what a good one. I'm in a happy mood and it's totaly because of you, and the Muslim thing, totaly with you even if I have a hard time to pronounce the name until I knew it's an arabic name. And the idea to use a muslim character is a so fearless move and a so good one. Thanks again.
3SayureWow thanks, YaY my " 1st finished story" and what a good one. I'm in a happy mood and it's totaly because of you, and the Muslim thing, totaly with you even if I have a hard time to pronounce the name until I knew it's an arabic name. And the idea to use a muslim character is a so fearless move and a so good one. Thanks again.
4/2/2012 c24 Junnie
Amazing,I absolutely loved it. Read it all in one day :)
Amazing,I absolutely loved it. Read it all in one day :)