for Art Criticism7/26/2011 c24 
1ninja-master-of-the-moon
Omg! This story was fantastic! I really like how it was really modern and full of details! ^.^ it was a really pleasant read!
1ninja-master-of-the-moonOmg! This story was fantastic! I really like how it was really modern and full of details! ^.^ it was a really pleasant read!
7/24/2011 c17 Shiloh
It's been lingering in the back of my mind since I started reading this story, and it's grown since the first chapter. I suspected then that it's what hooked me, and I'm beginning to believe I'm right. Aside from the plot and characters being highly addicting, I realized that the reason I'm glued to this several hours out of my day is because I can relate to James very well. It pretty much hit home when I finished this chapter and had to force the lump out of my throat. It terrifies me just about as much as it terrifies him. I just wanted to thank you for putting this here where I could find it, knowing that I'm not the only one like this, eve if James is a fictional character, makes me feel a lot better in ways I can't explain. I wondered for a while if I was broken.
Thanks. I really can't wait until I finish this. It's been amazing so far.
It's been lingering in the back of my mind since I started reading this story, and it's grown since the first chapter. I suspected then that it's what hooked me, and I'm beginning to believe I'm right. Aside from the plot and characters being highly addicting, I realized that the reason I'm glued to this several hours out of my day is because I can relate to James very well. It pretty much hit home when I finished this chapter and had to force the lump out of my throat. It terrifies me just about as much as it terrifies him. I just wanted to thank you for putting this here where I could find it, knowing that I'm not the only one like this, eve if James is a fictional character, makes me feel a lot better in ways I can't explain. I wondered for a while if I was broken.
Thanks. I really can't wait until I finish this. It's been amazing so far.
7/23/2011 c24 2NormaJean Beausoleil
geez oh man. if in ten years, i can write like you, i will be doing EXTREMELY well. thanks for another piece of wonderfullness. bravo as always.
2NormaJean Beausoleilgeez oh man. if in ten years, i can write like you, i will be doing EXTREMELY well. thanks for another piece of wonderfullness. bravo as always.
7/18/2011 c24 Fumiki
Wow, I had no idea James is that cute. I like Turkish POV. You make us realise how sweet he is and how in love he is to James :D
Wow, I had no idea James is that cute. I like Turkish POV. You make us realise how sweet he is and how in love he is to James :D
7/18/2011 c24 When Two Ends Meet
This was a wonderful read! I'm so glad you shared it with all us lurkers here on fictionpress.
I'm just here to fave it, I'm afraid, because I'm terrible at compliments or helpful criticism. I can honestly say I loved Turkish and James, though, and enjoyed watching their romance pan out.
This was a wonderful read! I'm so glad you shared it with all us lurkers here on fictionpress.
I'm just here to fave it, I'm afraid, because I'm terrible at compliments or helpful criticism. I can honestly say I loved Turkish and James, though, and enjoyed watching their romance pan out.
7/18/2011 c24 2Ethereal Discordance
I really loved this story! It was cute and the characters were really likable and realistic. Not to mention your writing style is very unique and entertaining to read. I'm definitely gonna read more from you! =)
2Ethereal DiscordanceI really loved this story! It was cute and the characters were really likable and realistic. Not to mention your writing style is very unique and entertaining to read. I'm definitely gonna read more from you! =)
7/17/2011 c24 Xanorillia Mallikore
I barely ever review, but this was so cute! Like, unbelievably cute. I got to the end of a chapter that said End, and I was just like 'this can not be it!'. But super cool dude, super cool.
I barely ever review, but this was so cute! Like, unbelievably cute. I got to the end of a chapter that said End, and I was just like 'this can not be it!'. But super cool dude, super cool.
7/17/2011 c24 shhsilence
Loved it! The end was a little abrupt...but it works for the piece. Well done!
Loved it! The end was a little abrupt...but it works for the piece. Well done!
7/16/2011 c24 ddz008
It was such a sweet and lovely epilogue! :)
I'm so happy to see that they have come really far in their relationship. Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
It was such a sweet and lovely epilogue! :)
I'm so happy to see that they have come really far in their relationship. Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
7/16/2011 c24 Deewhan
Oooh I love these two, really hope we haven't seen the last of them wanna know what happens during Meet the Rents ll, so yes that one shot sounds great right now.
Oooh I love these two, really hope we haven't seen the last of them wanna know what happens during Meet the Rents ll, so yes that one shot sounds great right now.
7/15/2011 c24 jessicas favorite stories
AMAZING!
does this mean theirs a new story?
.. you should do a sequel...
quite an amazing story
AMAZING!
does this mean theirs a new story?
.. you should do a sequel...
quite an amazing story
7/14/2011 c23 furthestcoast
CUTE CUTE CUTE.
3
And about art, as well!
I fell in love with this story.
Thank you for sharing this piece of art (no pun intended). 3
CUTE CUTE CUTE.
3
And about art, as well!
I fell in love with this story.
Thank you for sharing this piece of art (no pun intended). 3
7/3/2011 c23 16Oshini
Oh, man, this story was absolutely adorable! I loved it, along with the characters! But, ugh, I'm so tired. I stayed up till four in the morning so I could finish reading it, that's how much I liked it. Anyway, I'm happy James finally got his act together and Turkish and him are happy ever after!
~Oshini
16OshiniOh, man, this story was absolutely adorable! I loved it, along with the characters! But, ugh, I'm so tired. I stayed up till four in the morning so I could finish reading it, that's how much I liked it. Anyway, I'm happy James finally got his act together and Turkish and him are happy ever after!
~Oshini
6/6/2011 c23 Nock
I love this story, I reread it and still love it. It's so f***ing cuuuute :-)
I love this story, I reread it and still love it. It's so f***ing cuuuute :-)