for Love's Battle Original4/10/2012 c11 Apple
This is great I just found your work and hope for more.
This is great I just found your work and hope for more.
4/8/2012 c12 drakron
It´s so good you are writing again, yupi
It´s so good you are writing again, yupi
1/11/2012 c11 
2drakron
guau ( as we say in Spanish) it was a perfect fight, get together and fight again. Don't you love cycles?
2drakronguau ( as we say in Spanish) it was a perfect fight, get together and fight again. Don't you love cycles?
1/4/2012 c7 drakron
I read it all so far, I liked it a lot. Sorry I didn't leave reviews on each chapter, but it's almost midnight and I have to work tomorrow. Good job and good night.
I read it all so far, I liked it a lot. Sorry I didn't leave reviews on each chapter, but it's almost midnight and I have to work tomorrow. Good job and good night.
8/6/2011 c1 lucy
I dont want to be mean and I dont want to offend you, so please dont take this personally, but I read and was following the original version of this story and frankly I'm very disappointed with your 'rewrite'. The original was better structured, better story telling and simply better writing. I'm not sure what prompted you to rewrite this but I think you should consider perhaps looking again at the orignial, if you still have it, and if you were unhappy with elements of it then make /improvements/ to that version. It had a few flaws here and there maybe, but it was by far a better, more mature style and read than your second try.
I dont want to be mean and I dont want to offend you, so please dont take this personally, but I read and was following the original version of this story and frankly I'm very disappointed with your 'rewrite'. The original was better structured, better story telling and simply better writing. I'm not sure what prompted you to rewrite this but I think you should consider perhaps looking again at the orignial, if you still have it, and if you were unhappy with elements of it then make /improvements/ to that version. It had a few flaws here and there maybe, but it was by far a better, more mature style and read than your second try.
7/9/2011 c1 The Whlyde One
I love this, it reminds me a little of Blood & Chocolate the book which was way better than the movie. This is great, keep going.
I love this, it reminds me a little of Blood & Chocolate the book which was way better than the movie. This is great, keep going.
4/13/2011 c19 4Rio's Desire
Well I can't wait to read about what Leslie's fiance will think about Era!
4Rio's DesireWell I can't wait to read about what Leslie's fiance will think about Era!
4/5/2011 c13 Rio's Desire
One word. ADORABLE. I love your writing style, and Alia always knows just what to say and I like it!
One word. ADORABLE. I love your writing style, and Alia always knows just what to say and I like it!
4/5/2011 c3 Rio's Desire
Now I am drawn in even more! So Jack doesn't feel 'the pull' like she does? He didn't feel any different with her than any other wolf? Maybe this 'mate for life' thing isn't true for this new pack?
Now I am drawn in even more! So Jack doesn't feel 'the pull' like she does? He didn't feel any different with her than any other wolf? Maybe this 'mate for life' thing isn't true for this new pack?
1/8/2011 c21 pisces113
omg i love this story and i also love fortune's trip. you writing is awesome and i really enjoy it. please post more!
omg i love this story and i also love fortune's trip. you writing is awesome and i really enjoy it. please post more!