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8/27/2010 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
I'm not sure to exactly what this means, but is it to do with the fictatious stuff that we read actually being relevant to our real lives? That's what I got from it. There were so many poetic and beautiful lines within this.

"So she delicately fingered each antique page,

As if the parchment itself would slip through her fingers

Like the rivers of fantasy that

Flowed between "once upon a time" and "the end"."

Those were especially beautiful.
8/27/2010 c1 lymli
I like the narration. it's kinda exciting. the way you make her character is great and interesting.

have a great weekend.

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