for The Rules of Love and War2/24 c11 adamfranklin.uu
Your characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life!
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece, I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
Warm regards,
Addy.
Your characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life!
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece, I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
Warm regards,
Addy.
10/6/2018 c1 
13Shailaputri
Something is missing in the base line..first she started to feel very strongly for her boyfriend so that she would do anything for him, then it seems suddenly she falls for another guy and she didn't want to break up with her boyfriend too. and then to make her decisions right, the boyfriend was shown as the bad boy with worst habit of bullying which made small boy to commit suicide... Logically everything feels right. But seems like everything happens to be so quick. And I don't feel good about Wade having fucking buddy. Though it was just mentioned in one small place, it didn't give him any good credits. Makes him look like someone who was not interested in I think Luke's character could have been more positive than this to tone it up.
13ShailaputriSomething is missing in the base line..first she started to feel very strongly for her boyfriend so that she would do anything for him, then it seems suddenly she falls for another guy and she didn't want to break up with her boyfriend too. and then to make her decisions right, the boyfriend was shown as the bad boy with worst habit of bullying which made small boy to commit suicide... Logically everything feels right. But seems like everything happens to be so quick. And I don't feel good about Wade having fucking buddy. Though it was just mentioned in one small place, it didn't give him any good credits. Makes him look like someone who was not interested in I think Luke's character could have been more positive than this to tone it up.
10/5/2018 c11 Shailaputri
Overall it is a good read. From the updates I think that you came back and finished the story after a long time. That really takes much courage as an author. Appreciate your work.
Overall it is a good read. From the updates I think that you came back and finished the story after a long time. That really takes much courage as an author. Appreciate your work.
10/5/2018 c10 Shailaputri
I could have waited before feeling pity for Luke...didn't expect this turn of events and his true character..Luke is too cruel..
I could have waited before feeling pity for Luke...didn't expect this turn of events and his true character..Luke is too cruel..
10/5/2018 c9 Shailaputri
To be honest, overall I feel pity for Luke..I don't know what he did to deserve this..She started everything for him initially and ended up hurting him..Does she understand what she feels?
To be honest, overall I feel pity for Luke..I don't know what he did to deserve this..She started everything for him initially and ended up hurting him..Does she understand what she feels?
10/5/2018 c8 Shailaputri
She could have simply broke up with Luke..:S why she is confusing herself and others..
She could have simply broke up with Luke..:S why she is confusing herself and others..
10/5/2018 c7 Shailaputri
/I wanted him to show me that he cared so that I knew when I broke up with Luke, Wade would still want to be with me./ - I feel like here she seems to be very cautious instead of trustworthy, She can't do insurance for relationships I guess.
/I wanted him to show me that he cared so that I knew when I broke up with Luke, Wade would still want to be with me./ - I feel like here she seems to be very cautious instead of trustworthy, She can't do insurance for relationships I guess.
10/5/2018 c3 Shailaputri
/Sadly, I actually felt safer with Wade than I have been lately with Luke/ - you neatly put it in this one line where her relationship with Luke is going..
/Sadly, I actually felt safer with Wade than I have been lately with Luke/ - you neatly put it in this one line where her relationship with Luke is going..
8/31/2016 c11 leavemeialone
OMG it has been so long ago since I've read this. I had to reset my password for my account, since I didn't remember it and I really really wanted to send a comment to you. OMG I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY. I'm so glad you decided to finish this. YOU EVEN DECIDED TO LEAVE IT WITH A HAPPY ENDING! YES! First off, I am so happy that the two are together! Second, I'm glad that Lana decided to have the guts to talk to Wade. It isn't easy but yay! Third, I'm happy that she and Luke are both in a better place. It is great that he is going to therapy and hopefully working with his issues. Thank you so much for taking the time to finish this story! :) XD
OMG it has been so long ago since I've read this. I had to reset my password for my account, since I didn't remember it and I really really wanted to send a comment to you. OMG I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY. I'm so glad you decided to finish this. YOU EVEN DECIDED TO LEAVE IT WITH A HAPPY ENDING! YES! First off, I am so happy that the two are together! Second, I'm glad that Lana decided to have the guts to talk to Wade. It isn't easy but yay! Third, I'm happy that she and Luke are both in a better place. It is great that he is going to therapy and hopefully working with his issues. Thank you so much for taking the time to finish this story! :) XD
8/30/2016 c11 blue.birds99
Awwww I loved it! This was the perfect ending to such a beautiful story; definitely worth the wait (although I am super happy you are back)!
Awwww I loved it! This was the perfect ending to such a beautiful story; definitely worth the wait (although I am super happy you are back)!
11/15/2015 c10 crazydaisyyy
only one more chapter to go and U couldn't finish it? *cries* it was a wonderful story tho thank u :-)
only one more chapter to go and U couldn't finish it? *cries* it was a wonderful story tho thank u :-)
9/4/2015 c10 Guest
Damn I like this story. I hope you continue, I really like the realistic parts of this story with the bullying. Gosh I sometimes forget these people are fictional characters. It really hurts that the bullying was because of someone's own sexuality. I mean what's wrong with that! As far as I'm concerned ITS THE FLIPPING 21st- century!... *sighs* when reading the last few chapters, it's a sad reminder there are some bad apples out there. But then again all u can do is try to point them in the write direction...
Damn I like this story. I hope you continue, I really like the realistic parts of this story with the bullying. Gosh I sometimes forget these people are fictional characters. It really hurts that the bullying was because of someone's own sexuality. I mean what's wrong with that! As far as I'm concerned ITS THE FLIPPING 21st- century!... *sighs* when reading the last few chapters, it's a sad reminder there are some bad apples out there. But then again all u can do is try to point them in the write direction...
8/4/2014 c10 Elen
Hi. So, I don't know know if you're still plannig on finishing this story, but I really hope you will. To put it briefly, I adore this story. The plotline, the characters, the writing, and everything else. I feel like it's so real, (and realistic) and I definitely can make connections between Oren's hardship and some real-life situations (unfortunately). But really, this is one of the best FP stories I've read, and I can't believe I just stumbled upon it a couple days ago. It seems to have been a while since you updated, but I'm still personally rooting for a happy ending :)))
Hi. So, I don't know know if you're still plannig on finishing this story, but I really hope you will. To put it briefly, I adore this story. The plotline, the characters, the writing, and everything else. I feel like it's so real, (and realistic) and I definitely can make connections between Oren's hardship and some real-life situations (unfortunately). But really, this is one of the best FP stories I've read, and I can't believe I just stumbled upon it a couple days ago. It seems to have been a while since you updated, but I'm still personally rooting for a happy ending :)))