for The Rules of Love and War5/30/2014 c10 selfless me
AwwwwW i seriously cry through the whole chapter. Please please put the last chapter. I really wanna know what will to Lana and Wade, and please put them togetherr, they deserve it after going through everything that they went through. Please please update fast!
AwwwwW i seriously cry through the whole chapter. Please please put the last chapter. I really wanna know what will to Lana and Wade, and please put them togetherr, they deserve it after going through everything that they went through. Please please update fast!
12/24/2013 c10 
1my princess ending
Happy ending. Not only because I really like happy endings but because Wade deserves one. Call me weird but I think Luke deserves one too. Like, end it with him going to therapist's offices for appointments or something to control that anger problem of his. Give Wade and Lana the ending they deserve and if you don't, I will personally hack into your account and rewrite the whole ending. :)
Even though this isn't my favorite story, I think the message you're trying to send is really important and administration needs to get together with bullying/cyber bullying. I'm sometimes a bully but so is everyone though I find it hard to believe in bullying until suicide since I'm from San Francisco which is a place that's quite friendly. Regardless, I like the story line and the message it was trying to send out. Can't wait for the finale!
With love,
my princess ending
1my princess endingHappy ending. Not only because I really like happy endings but because Wade deserves one. Call me weird but I think Luke deserves one too. Like, end it with him going to therapist's offices for appointments or something to control that anger problem of his. Give Wade and Lana the ending they deserve and if you don't, I will personally hack into your account and rewrite the whole ending. :)
Even though this isn't my favorite story, I think the message you're trying to send is really important and administration needs to get together with bullying/cyber bullying. I'm sometimes a bully but so is everyone though I find it hard to believe in bullying until suicide since I'm from San Francisco which is a place that's quite friendly. Regardless, I like the story line and the message it was trying to send out. Can't wait for the finale!
With love,
my princess ending
12/24/2013 c9 my princess ending
So I was actually wrong but she definitely took a while before breaking up with Luke, it just wasn't written. I'm proud of Lana and I understand why she'd cry even though he treats her like shit. I'm so glad that it's at least realistic.
There's an error in this chapter. When Luke pulls Lana to the side, he brings her to an empty classroom I believe? Since they were in the hall earlier. But then later, it says that they broke up in the parking lot. It might help to avoid these mistakes by either writing it in one go or rereading what you've written every time you pick up your pen to add to a chapter. It also helps with fixing grammar/spelling issues.
With love,
my princess ending
So I was actually wrong but she definitely took a while before breaking up with Luke, it just wasn't written. I'm proud of Lana and I understand why she'd cry even though he treats her like shit. I'm so glad that it's at least realistic.
There's an error in this chapter. When Luke pulls Lana to the side, he brings her to an empty classroom I believe? Since they were in the hall earlier. But then later, it says that they broke up in the parking lot. It might help to avoid these mistakes by either writing it in one go or rereading what you've written every time you pick up your pen to add to a chapter. It also helps with fixing grammar/spelling issues.
With love,
my princess ending
12/23/2013 c8 my princess ending
Something in me tells me that Lana is gonna have trouble breaking up with Luke and these last few chapters are gonna be filled with nothing except drama.
With love,
my princess ending
Something in me tells me that Lana is gonna have trouble breaking up with Luke and these last few chapters are gonna be filled with nothing except drama.
With love,
my princess ending
12/21/2013 c4 my princess ending
There's something about this story that doesn't make me comfortable. Usually I just sink into the story and it feels as if I'm there, inside, experiencing everything with the main character. I feel like it's the characters; I'm not too ecstatic about Wade, Luke, or Lana. I love her name by the way, Lana Winters. I hope the problem gets announced soon so it'd be more intriguing.
With love,
my princess ending
There's something about this story that doesn't make me comfortable. Usually I just sink into the story and it feels as if I'm there, inside, experiencing everything with the main character. I feel like it's the characters; I'm not too ecstatic about Wade, Luke, or Lana. I love her name by the way, Lana Winters. I hope the problem gets announced soon so it'd be more intriguing.
With love,
my princess ending
12/20/2013 c2 my princess ending
My dear, this was the last story to complete on my list. With all the other ones, I wasn't that excited to read but they ended up being really interesting. This one doesn't capture my attention as much as the others do. It might be because I had just finished Like Father, Like Son and that was pretty freaking good and now I have to suddenly switch gears to something else. I'm sure it'll get better for me!
With love,
my princess ending
My dear, this was the last story to complete on my list. With all the other ones, I wasn't that excited to read but they ended up being really interesting. This one doesn't capture my attention as much as the others do. It might be because I had just finished Like Father, Like Son and that was pretty freaking good and now I have to suddenly switch gears to something else. I'm sure it'll get better for me!
With love,
my princess ending
12/9/2013 c10 silentvoiceshout
i hope u come back with the last chapter soon..
luke's crazy!what an idiot! his stupidity just cost a person his life,another his future n a family their beloved one..bullies are stupid cowards as everyone knows...
i hate & never read incomplete stories but damn I have read 2 of ur's coz I like ur work! will wait for Wade & Lana's happy ending..
i hope u come back with the last chapter soon..
luke's crazy!what an idiot! his stupidity just cost a person his life,another his future n a family their beloved one..bullies are stupid cowards as everyone knows...
i hate & never read incomplete stories but damn I have read 2 of ur's coz I like ur work! will wait for Wade & Lana's happy ending..
11/26/2013 c10 pastelcolors
ohmygod, don't. you. flipping. dare.
I read a story where they start again with introductions at the end AND I CAN'T FLIPPING DO THAT AGAIN.
So please let them live happily ever after at Duke because Wade is a freaking sweetheart and the idea of not having them together is, ugh.
ohmygod, don't. you. flipping. dare.
I read a story where they start again with introductions at the end AND I CAN'T FLIPPING DO THAT AGAIN.
So please let them live happily ever after at Duke because Wade is a freaking sweetheart and the idea of not having them together is, ugh.
11/12/2013 c10 Nobody
Please don't make the ending depressing I don't think my heart could take that.
Please don't make the ending depressing I don't think my heart could take that.
11/12/2013 c10 Sharon
I would love a happy ending after all the sadness and pain they both have had to endure, unless will be heartbreaking.
I would love a happy ending after all the sadness and pain they both have had to endure, unless will be heartbreaking.
10/14/2013 c10 Happy Ending Han
Happy ending I know everyone's expecting and junk so it won't be much of a surprise but seriously? Who doesn'tlike a happy ending.?
Happy ending I know everyone's expecting and junk so it won't be much of a surprise but seriously? Who doesn'tlike a happy ending.?
10/14/2013 c10 Choukou
Resolution! I want Wade and Lana to be together. Possibly in a "future" setting where you can see where everyone landed :)
Resolution! I want Wade and Lana to be together. Possibly in a "future" setting where you can see where everyone landed :)
10/14/2013 c10 lostlamb
WOW! At least we finally know the story. There is definitely something wrong with Luke. Wow.
WOW! At least we finally know the story. There is definitely something wrong with Luke. Wow.
10/13/2013 c10 clumsyhead
Ofcourse Happy ending...please please,Wade surely deserves it,he is like waiting for so long for her to come around if not for us for him hehe...yeah I too want to know is it so diFficult for people to be nice to each other? I really hate people like Luke,get a life... Is your life not enough to screw so you start screwing others happiness n satisfied life...sorry got little carried away but pls stop BULLYING...get a life people if you r bullying
Ofcourse Happy ending...please please,Wade surely deserves it,he is like waiting for so long for her to come around if not for us for him hehe...yeah I too want to know is it so diFficult for people to be nice to each other? I really hate people like Luke,get a life... Is your life not enough to screw so you start screwing others happiness n satisfied life...sorry got little carried away but pls stop BULLYING...get a life people if you r bullying
10/13/2013 c10 mylittleprincess
Happy ending please,update soon.
Happy ending please,update soon.