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10/13/2013 c10 3Megsi
Oh God. The feels in this chapter wow. I nearly cried. It's a very real and sensitive issue and you captured it perfectly.
I would've been interested to hear what Luke had to say to defend himself but I guess Lana summed him up perfectly. That's some fucked up history.
Wade and Lana are so perfect and of course if you ask me, or any reader, we're going to say give us a happy ending. But if you write one just to make us happy I don't think I'll like it. Go with your plan, it's your story, even if we're not immediately happy with it this is your baby that you've been working on. Don't change it for us. I'm sure whatever you'll write we'll understand why and I'll still love it even if they never happen or if you leave it open at college, because that would be real and your story deserves a good ending not something you forced for the readers.
10/13/2013 c10 Sorraya T
Happy ending! Happy ending or I'll die inside!
10/13/2013 c10 Guest
Happy ending please! We need it to balance out the bad shit drama with Luke...
10/13/2013 c10 Sheveen
Happy ending please! Wade deserves happiness after all the crap Luke put him through.
10/13/2013 c10 nanina15
Please make it a happy ending! I'll cry otherwise. :(
10/13/2013 c10 deets1
I'm going to regret this, but it's your story, so do what you plan, even if we'll want to kill you. Then hide. From all of us. Thanks so much for writing this story-it's awesome. He fact that the happy ending is so hard to achieve, if it'll be achieved at all, makes it more realistic, and just better.

Thanks
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10/13/2013 c10 2renegade01
Poor Lana. I don't envy her black eye! Luke has some twisted logic.

I'm glad she's not jumping straight into a relationship with Wade. I want her to be with Wade in the end but not sure how that's going to work in one chapter unless there's a time jump or something. Great job with this ;-) loved reading it
10/13/2013 c10 3ACleverPenName
Happy ending PLEASE!No open endings!I don't like open endings...
10/13/2013 c10 2mandy96
Mad For Figs! I haven't reviwed for a while but right now i have a short holidayjust caught up with all the new chapters i love how you update so regularly and i can tell that you spend good time writing your chapters, they're all amazing! I can't wait for the final chapter of this, hope it's super exciting and everything I love your writing, never stop! [but don't forget to do work and spend time just chilling :)
_manda
10/2/2013 c9 19Alaeryel
YAY GOODY GOODY-SHE BLOODY FUCKING DID IT! Jumping for joy, doing happy dance-I AM SO HAPPY NOW! I am glad Sal and Tanya are being so cool about all this and that everyone now can get along! I know it has to be hard on Lana-it isn't like they dated just a few months it was 3 years so YEAH IT WOULD HURT! I find myself wishing for a few more chapters of this but oh well I will be watching for more!
10/2/2013 c8 Alaeryel
YOU CAPTURED EVERYTHING PERFECTLY! I am going to ASSUME that Oren's suicide had something to do with Luke's brother-I am PRETTY SURE OF IT and for some reason Luke wants to keep throwing salt into the wounds-mf'in S.O.B. I am glad they both admitted their feelings to each other and I know until the story is finished that there will be more twists and issues in Wade and Lana's relationship but DAMN IF THEY AREN'T PERFECT FOR ONE ANOTHER and now I feel guilty for blaming everything on Wade! DOWN RIGHT BEYOND AMAZING here girl!
10/2/2013 c7 Alaeryel
I FELL HEAD OVER HEELS for this chapter Fig-the BRILLIANCE SHONE THRU! I am dying to know what Luke's family has to do with Wade's and I hope she follows thru with breaking up with the other jerk! I am in love with Paul-atleast he gave Lana some words for thought and I hope she looks long and hard AND I hope Wade's insecurity-yes I said insecurity doesn't get in the way of the best thing to happen to him! PERFECTLY FANTABULOUS!
10/2/2013 c6 Alaeryel
I LOVED it myself girl and it didn't seem hurried to me! I am GLAD she stood up for Wade in the principal's office when Luke started to lie and I can't believe she agreed to go to Luke's place but hopefully she grows some balls and kicks that asshole to the curb! GREAT WRITING!
10/2/2013 c5 Alaeryel
Well I have to say I am liking Wade more and more and I actually think he and Lana make the better couple! I am running out of words to EXPRESS HOW GREAT I THINK YOUR WRITING IS and the EXCEPTIONAL STORIES you have written! YOU ARE TOO DAMN GOOD Fig!
10/1/2013 c9 Choukou
FINALLY. So glad she broke up with him
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