1/16/2011 c1 99Dreamers-Requiem
I really like this, the ending is very sweet and gave me a warm fuzzy glow :P But, I think there are a few things that slightly bugged me (not enough to deter my enjoyment, I have to stress); mainly, the way it's built up at the start is as if she doesn't know him as well as she does later on - I don't know, I think it's a little misleading, maybe? Also, 'stocker' should be stalker, I think? Anyway, yeah, a really lovely short story :)
I really like this, the ending is very sweet and gave me a warm fuzzy glow :P But, I think there are a few things that slightly bugged me (not enough to deter my enjoyment, I have to stress); mainly, the way it's built up at the start is as if she doesn't know him as well as she does later on - I don't know, I think it's a little misleading, maybe? Also, 'stocker' should be stalker, I think? Anyway, yeah, a really lovely short story :)
8/29/2010 c1 3gnominator
ooh hoo hoo! so what's gonna happen now? :) *a little eyebrow wiggle* :P
and are trying to say "am i a STALKER?" or am i missing the meaning of stocker?
amazing story :D i really enjoyed it :) especially well done to have made reading a love sick letter VERY enjoyable :) x
ooh hoo hoo! so what's gonna happen now? :) *a little eyebrow wiggle* :P
and are trying to say "am i a STALKER?" or am i missing the meaning of stocker?
amazing story :D i really enjoyed it :) especially well done to have made reading a love sick letter VERY enjoyable :) x
8/28/2010 c1 8Creative Pumpkin
O...M...G! that is SO... YEAH! i really like how you put a whole entire story in a letter she's gonna give him! although, it was a little bit confusing... but this is a really good story! like, really really really good! Like my friend would say, BEAST!
O...M...G! that is SO... YEAH! i really like how you put a whole entire story in a letter she's gonna give him! although, it was a little bit confusing... but this is a really good story! like, really really really good! Like my friend would say, BEAST!
8/28/2010 c1 frenchverb
I legitimately gasped at the end, when I read, "Love you too". This is such a great story, I loved it!
I legitimately gasped at the end, when I read, "Love you too". This is such a great story, I loved it!