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10/24/2010 c1 salt pillar
Gah! Have I really not returned the review you gave me yet?

How could you let this happen? Why didn't you yell at me earlier?

Anyway, I couldn't find much to complain about. Your grammar's good, couldn't find any mistakes in spelling, although I'm not that great at catching picky things.

We seem to have similar writing styles, no? *wink wink*

I like your main character, and I like how you make the characters realistic even though this is a fantasy story. The thing I've found with fantasy lately is that the characters seem kind of monotonous... I think it's because the authors rely on the plot and events rather than having the characters develop the story, but that's just me.

Sorry if I don't get to the next chapter soon, but I promise I will.

And PLEASE, if it's taking forever, just yell at me. I don't mind, really.
8/29/2010 c1 Xx Road Kamelot xX
Ooh-this is AH-MAZ-ING! You need to write more! Keeping an eye on this story; added it to favorites and subscribed! :-D

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