for The Celestial City9/5/2010 c4 Idle Psyche
I'm a sucker for time-travel/historical stories, so I'm glad I clicked on this link :) It's off to a promising start and I'm curious how you'll explore Elora's role during this time period as a part of Louis' court; if she can avoid being branded as a witch first...
One thing that may be answered in future chapters though - if Elora claimed to have a pretty good/secure/loving life up 'til now, why was she suddenly hurled back in time? Hm... Pls update soon ;)
I'm a sucker for time-travel/historical stories, so I'm glad I clicked on this link :) It's off to a promising start and I'm curious how you'll explore Elora's role during this time period as a part of Louis' court; if she can avoid being branded as a witch first...
One thing that may be answered in future chapters though - if Elora claimed to have a pretty good/secure/loving life up 'til now, why was she suddenly hurled back in time? Hm... Pls update soon ;)