for The Celestial City10/14/2012 c38 guest
This chapter totally broke my heart! I hope they can be reunited
This chapter totally broke my heart! I hope they can be reunited
10/12/2012 c38 C. Aleshi
Oh no, she's going back to the future... will she confront her rapist? & Please put Elora & Louis out of misery!
Oh no, she's going back to the future... will she confront her rapist? & Please put Elora & Louis out of misery!
10/11/2012 c38 Lionesscouer
You made me cry in this chapter. I knew it would happen eventually, but it's still not fair. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read on fictionpress. It's beautiful and funny and well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
You made me cry in this chapter. I knew it would happen eventually, but it's still not fair. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read on fictionpress. It's beautiful and funny and well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
10/10/2012 c38 cpk962008
AGGHH! DON'T LEAVE IT AT THAT! They better be reunited. Update soon!
AGGHH! DON'T LEAVE IT AT THAT! They better be reunited. Update soon!
8/29/2012 c36 C. Aleshi
Philippe already is the antagonist in my mind, I cannot help but wish he did die in the fire! Elora is way too forgiving. :)
Thanks for the chapter!
Philippe already is the antagonist in my mind, I cannot help but wish he did die in the fire! Elora is way too forgiving. :)
Thanks for the chapter!
8/28/2012 c36 
1Lorana
I do hope you go with it not being Louis behind the fire; with Philippe or a foreign enemy being behind it instead.
1LoranaI do hope you go with it not being Louis behind the fire; with Philippe or a foreign enemy being behind it instead.
8/6/2012 c35 Aleshi
Wow, the return of the antagonists! I'm relieved nothing went wrong and now they're happily married :) Thanks for the chapter!
Wow, the return of the antagonists! I'm relieved nothing went wrong and now they're happily married :) Thanks for the chapter!
6/23/2012 c33 Superlils
Oh my god...
I did not think of hang on a history like that one day and nevertheless I dream about it for a long time (I am fascinated by Louis XIV)
In that, let us add that I am French, do not speak English very well but manage to read it!
I am really fascinated by your history which I have just read in one breath! The characters are substantial, the characters stick with the mentalities of time but Elora comes to upset everything!
You are endowed and thanks to you, we are not bored, finding the court of Versailles in the time of his magnificence.
I really look forward to reading the continuation of their adventures.
Thank you very much for this history
That the imagination is with you
Oh my god...
I did not think of hang on a history like that one day and nevertheless I dream about it for a long time (I am fascinated by Louis XIV)
In that, let us add that I am French, do not speak English very well but manage to read it!
I am really fascinated by your history which I have just read in one breath! The characters are substantial, the characters stick with the mentalities of time but Elora comes to upset everything!
You are endowed and thanks to you, we are not bored, finding the court of Versailles in the time of his magnificence.
I really look forward to reading the continuation of their adventures.
Thank you very much for this history
That the imagination is with you
5/22/2012 c33 UnIdenteefyabel
I cannot explain how I felt I came to the end of the story. Of course, we all knew it was going to happen sooner or later (referring to the end of chapter 38 that I had to read out of desperation on Fanfiction.) I can't believe you left us hanging like that! T_T I screamed into my pillow and thrashed about on my bed.
At this rate, I will die if I don't have the next chapter D: Everyday I check my email in case you update. What have you done to me? T_T Please update soon, you are a truly remarkable writer.
I cannot explain how I felt I came to the end of the story. Of course, we all knew it was going to happen sooner or later (referring to the end of chapter 38 that I had to read out of desperation on Fanfiction.) I can't believe you left us hanging like that! T_T I screamed into my pillow and thrashed about on my bed.
At this rate, I will die if I don't have the next chapter D: Everyday I check my email in case you update. What have you done to me? T_T Please update soon, you are a truly remarkable writer.
5/17/2012 c9 UnIdenteefyabel
DAMN IT! I LOVE THIS! I'M LOVING HOW SHE'S SHOCKED EVERYONE WITH HER EPIC SKILLS xD
DAMN IT! I LOVE THIS! I'M LOVING HOW SHE'S SHOCKED EVERYONE WITH HER EPIC SKILLS xD
5/17/2012 c4 UnIdenteefyabel
This. Is. Amazing. I love the way your writing is structured and the vivid descriptions in your story. I can't believe you posted this online. You could easily transform this into a real novel. But hey, online is so much more convenient for me ;D Again, this is amazing.
This. Is. Amazing. I love the way your writing is structured and the vivid descriptions in your story. I can't believe you posted this online. You could easily transform this into a real novel. But hey, online is so much more convenient for me ;D Again, this is amazing.
5/1/2012 c33 use.less.woman
Lovely! I love Elora more and more. I thought it was him all along. Great chapter. Bring on the wedding :)
Lovely! I love Elora more and more. I thought it was him all along. Great chapter. Bring on the wedding :)
4/6/2012 c32 safe
please update. and please make sure louis marries elora and make her queen. love this story. excellent
please update. and please make sure louis marries elora and make her queen. love this story. excellent
3/26/2012 c32 ebs12
I don't know whether it was Phillipe or Colbert who ordered it. It could have been Colbert just to get rid of Elora but the plan to kill the King reeks of Phillipe, as does the fact that he said Elora didn't have to say anything about her time when she was captured. Hmmmmmmmmm curious... So Phillipe is my guess - am I close?
Update soon please :)
I don't know whether it was Phillipe or Colbert who ordered it. It could have been Colbert just to get rid of Elora but the plan to kill the King reeks of Phillipe, as does the fact that he said Elora didn't have to say anything about her time when she was captured. Hmmmmmmmmm curious... So Phillipe is my guess - am I close?
Update soon please :)