for The Celestial City3/23/2012 c32 Elise Cromwell
OH MY GOSH IT HAS TO BE PHILIPPE. I've always thought he was sketchy, and he acted way suspicious in this chapter. Great chapter, I loved it!
OH MY GOSH IT HAS TO BE PHILIPPE. I've always thought he was sketchy, and he acted way suspicious in this chapter. Great chapter, I loved it!
3/22/2012 c32 use.less.woman
A few weeks? Are you kidding? This chapter was amazing! I am so glad that she has finally gotten back with Louis and I think I know who the ringleader is. BUT I can not wait until you update! Update Update Update :)
A few weeks? Are you kidding? This chapter was amazing! I am so glad that she has finally gotten back with Louis and I think I know who the ringleader is. BUT I can not wait until you update! Update Update Update :)
3/22/2012 c32 
1verge
Amazing as always! I'm glad our heroine in so quick to work things out. Hopefully she has the right answer! I've got my own suspicions *cough starts with a P cough*
I eagerly await your next chapter! Do you think you will start a new story after this one? I would love to know :)
-v
1vergeAmazing as always! I'm glad our heroine in so quick to work things out. Hopefully she has the right answer! I've got my own suspicions *cough starts with a P cough*
I eagerly await your next chapter! Do you think you will start a new story after this one? I would love to know :)
-v
2/19/2012 c31 1scurvykills
:) I love your story. I think it is one of the most well-written I have read in a long time. But oh my goodness! i am dying! When are you going to update! hahaha I am going crazy. :P Hope everything is alright. very much looking forward to the next chapter.
1scurvykills:) I love your story. I think it is one of the most well-written I have read in a long time. But oh my goodness! i am dying! When are you going to update! hahaha I am going crazy. :P Hope everything is alright. very much looking forward to the next chapter.
2/6/2012 c31 1verge
I was just about to go to sleep when I got an email alert for the story. Of course I could not resist the temptation of reading it. And I'm glad I did!
I like the new plot that's going on, but I hope our heroine can escape the lion's den and get back to her royal lover soon! Well... not too soon. I kind of like the new badboy/potential one-sided love interest?
I think you're causing your readers to develop stockholm syndrome! :)
Please keep up the amazing work. I adore this story, as it possesses some of my favorite aspects: timetravel, romance, royalty, multiple love interests, and a strong female character.
1vergeI was just about to go to sleep when I got an email alert for the story. Of course I could not resist the temptation of reading it. And I'm glad I did!
I like the new plot that's going on, but I hope our heroine can escape the lion's den and get back to her royal lover soon! Well... not too soon. I kind of like the new badboy/potential one-sided love interest?
I think you're causing your readers to develop stockholm syndrome! :)
Please keep up the amazing work. I adore this story, as it possesses some of my favorite aspects: timetravel, romance, royalty, multiple love interests, and a strong female character.
2/6/2012 c30 use.less.woman
Wow This story is AMAZING! I love Louis and all his flaws. I love Elora for the crazy lady she is. The entire story is well written and just pulls me in.
This cliff hanger is killer! Please update quickly.
Wow This story is AMAZING! I love Louis and all his flaws. I love Elora for the crazy lady she is. The entire story is well written and just pulls me in.
This cliff hanger is killer! Please update quickly.
1/18/2012 c30 Elise Cromwell
Woot woot! I totally knew Hassan was Mendak! I love when I'm right. x) Fabulous chapter as always!
Woot woot! I totally knew Hassan was Mendak! I love when I'm right. x) Fabulous chapter as always!
1/18/2012 c30 verge
Wow! I was just as surprised as Elora was by Hassan/Sameer's deceit. I am always happy to see an update alert in my inbox :)!
Love your story! It's simply amazing, and it's the only one I follow on fictionpress these days.
Wow! I was just as surprised as Elora was by Hassan/Sameer's deceit. I am always happy to see an update alert in my inbox :)!
Love your story! It's simply amazing, and it's the only one I follow on fictionpress these days.
12/28/2011 c29 E
This chapter is really good. I can't wait till Elora meets the Master of the house
This chapter is really good. I can't wait till Elora meets the Master of the house
11/17/2011 c28 Fan
Your chapters are always so lovely and well-worth waiting for. I love this story!
Your chapters are always so lovely and well-worth waiting for. I love this story!
10/26/2011 c27 oneofyourFANS
You cant emagine how i loove time travel stories and you gave me the perfect one to read. i read all chapters and now im angry at you for not updating the next. please i really think you deserve to be known!
You cant emagine how i loove time travel stories and you gave me the perfect one to read. i read all chapters and now im angry at you for not updating the next. please i really think you deserve to be known!
10/16/2011 c27 1Lorana
Loved the last chapter. Really proved how much they each cared about each other when they learned they each got hurt.
As I was reading it I couldn't help but think it was a horrible idea that Elora jumped on a horse and took off at a gallop. (but impressed she made it as far as she did before getting thrown) Falling off horses stinks big time have way too much experience with that, but glad you gave her only minor injuries.
1LoranaLoved the last chapter. Really proved how much they each cared about each other when they learned they each got hurt.
As I was reading it I couldn't help but think it was a horrible idea that Elora jumped on a horse and took off at a gallop. (but impressed she made it as far as she did before getting thrown) Falling off horses stinks big time have way too much experience with that, but glad you gave her only minor injuries.
10/15/2011 c27 ebs12
I wonder how Chris and the King's brother will react to Elora and Louis getting engaged again. Please update soon :)
I wonder how Chris and the King's brother will react to Elora and Louis getting engaged again. Please update soon :)
10/14/2011 c27 C. Aleshi
Thank you for the happy chapter! So glad they're back together. Can't wait for 28 :)
Thank you for the happy chapter! So glad they're back together. Can't wait for 28 :)