for Virtual Reality6/11/2012 c2 Bexelen
Hi, don't know what sort of review that you would like, but I noticed that you used the wrong spelling of 'allowed'- 'aloud'
Apologies if this is not the correct area to suggest corrections of this ilk.
Hi, don't know what sort of review that you would like, but I noticed that you used the wrong spelling of 'allowed'- 'aloud'
Apologies if this is not the correct area to suggest corrections of this ilk.
2/18/2012 c7 
8Fleur du Destin
I'm rereading this story because it's that awesome. Thanks for being a great author and thank you for posting it on Fictionpress. You definitely deserve more reviews as well.
~ Fleur
8Fleur du DestinI'm rereading this story because it's that awesome. Thanks for being a great author and thank you for posting it on Fictionpress. You definitely deserve more reviews as well.
~ Fleur
1/12/2012 c31 pbgurl
I really like this ending, but I'm sad it's over :(
Now Chase and Mel can start fresh. One question though, Mel isn't a demon anymore right but Chase still is?
-Liz :D
I really like this ending, but I'm sad it's over :(
Now Chase and Mel can start fresh. One question though, Mel isn't a demon anymore right but Chase still is?
-Liz :D
12/18/2011 c31 Fate
(Hey! I have a special mention! :D)
Ohmygoodness. I teared up. I'm so proud of your ending! It was bittersweet and it broke my heart and it was totally great! It was sad and happy and just all around awesome.
I'm so glad you toughed it out and finished writing this and I'm glad I finally finished reading it. I adored the whole 'crazy ride' and I can't wait to start reading your next project. Hope you enjoyed getting my reviews again!
(Hey! I have a special mention! :D)
Ohmygoodness. I teared up. I'm so proud of your ending! It was bittersweet and it broke my heart and it was totally great! It was sad and happy and just all around awesome.
I'm so glad you toughed it out and finished writing this and I'm glad I finally finished reading it. I adored the whole 'crazy ride' and I can't wait to start reading your next project. Hope you enjoyed getting my reviews again!
12/18/2011 c30 Fate
Ohmygoodgawd, this chapter was great.
First off, I love bad guys. They're so much fun to write and read about. Plus, the little romance was cute. Then it was suddenly brillant as you revealed that it was just a distraction.
Second off, CHASE! Just, Chase being there is awesome.
Third, CHASE AND ANGST. Oh, it was so heartbreaking it was great! I loved it! It was well written and I wanted to cry and it was just awesome. (Well, not for Mel, but you know what I mean.)
Fourth, I'm sad that I'm reaching the end.
Fifth, but I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter! Off I go! (But gawddamn, this was a good one.)
Ohmygoodgawd, this chapter was great.
First off, I love bad guys. They're so much fun to write and read about. Plus, the little romance was cute. Then it was suddenly brillant as you revealed that it was just a distraction.
Second off, CHASE! Just, Chase being there is awesome.
Third, CHASE AND ANGST. Oh, it was so heartbreaking it was great! I loved it! It was well written and I wanted to cry and it was just awesome. (Well, not for Mel, but you know what I mean.)
Fourth, I'm sad that I'm reaching the end.
Fifth, but I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter! Off I go! (But gawddamn, this was a good one.)
12/18/2011 c29 Fate
Hi again! I will finish this story tonight! That is my goal! Also, I'm too lazy to log in. =p
So anyways, I'm glad that I'm behind here, because otherwise I think I'd be pretty pissed about the cliffhanger. It was a good chapter though. Somehow both plot filled and fillery. I don't know how that works, but it does.
Good plan, too. Hitting them both together. Also, good rhymes. Really good ones. (After NaNo, I realized how much rhyming for things like that sucks.) Uh... I'm anxious to finish, so off I go!
(Just because I feel the need to say it, because I haven't in a while: Chase is yummy. C:)
Hi again! I will finish this story tonight! That is my goal! Also, I'm too lazy to log in. =p
So anyways, I'm glad that I'm behind here, because otherwise I think I'd be pretty pissed about the cliffhanger. It was a good chapter though. Somehow both plot filled and fillery. I don't know how that works, but it does.
Good plan, too. Hitting them both together. Also, good rhymes. Really good ones. (After NaNo, I realized how much rhyming for things like that sucks.) Uh... I'm anxious to finish, so off I go!
(Just because I feel the need to say it, because I haven't in a while: Chase is yummy. C:)
12/1/2011 c28 Fate
Hi! Remember me? I'm that girl who used to review your stories all the time. ;p
GUESS WHAT! Okay, I'll tell you! You'll probably learn it after the meeting today, but I'll inform you now. FICTIONPRESS HAS BEEN UNBLOCKED. :D
Anyway, I'm kind of glad that I didn't read this when you posted it. The cliffhanger would make me angry. It's terrible! Not the chapter. Very good chapter. But the cliffhanger. It makes me hate you a little bit. D: And I don't have time to read the next chapter.
It's been so long since I've done this that I don't know how to end it. Maybe with an 'update soon' but you're done so... Congrats on finishing? Yes. I'll end with that. Congrats on finishing VR forever ago. I'm sorry I haven't had time to read it. Now, adios! I shall return with more reviews later.
Hi! Remember me? I'm that girl who used to review your stories all the time. ;p
GUESS WHAT! Okay, I'll tell you! You'll probably learn it after the meeting today, but I'll inform you now. FICTIONPRESS HAS BEEN UNBLOCKED. :D
Anyway, I'm kind of glad that I didn't read this when you posted it. The cliffhanger would make me angry. It's terrible! Not the chapter. Very good chapter. But the cliffhanger. It makes me hate you a little bit. D: And I don't have time to read the next chapter.
It's been so long since I've done this that I don't know how to end it. Maybe with an 'update soon' but you're done so... Congrats on finishing? Yes. I'll end with that. Congrats on finishing VR forever ago. I'm sorry I haven't had time to read it. Now, adios! I shall return with more reviews later.
12/1/2011 c28 Fate
Hi! Remember me? I'm that girl who used to review your stories on a regular basis. ;p
GUESS WHAT!
Hi! Remember me? I'm that girl who used to review your stories on a regular basis. ;p
GUESS WHAT!
11/27/2011 c20 Zoe Summerfield
I'll just say... Rooms & touching, thats a creepy title ;)
I'll just say... Rooms & touching, thats a creepy title ;)
11/11/2011 c31 Tsughi
Half expected Mel to look for her mark when she was in the bathroom to confirm her adventure.
Great job! Really enjoyed the read :)
Half expected Mel to look for her mark when she was in the bathroom to confirm her adventure.
Great job! Really enjoyed the read :)
11/3/2011 c31 1Laurel Valentine
OMG! IM SOOOOOO SAD ITS OVER! IM GONNA REALLY MISS THIS BOOK! sniffle ! crying OH GREAT YOUR MAKING ME CRY! hahahahaha im such a drama queen :) ps: you should reconsider making a sequel this story has a lot of potental! you dont have to make it now just consider it in the near future... it can even be in 4 years!
I love this story and i love all the characters in it... :)
1Laurel ValentineOMG! IM SOOOOOO SAD ITS OVER! IM GONNA REALLY MISS THIS BOOK! sniffle ! crying OH GREAT YOUR MAKING ME CRY! hahahahaha im such a drama queen :) ps: you should reconsider making a sequel this story has a lot of potental! you dont have to make it now just consider it in the near future... it can even be in 4 years!
I love this story and i love all the characters in it... :)
11/1/2011 c31 4White Alchemist
That was... bold of Melody to kiss him out in the open. XDDD I have a feeling he knows her but he doesn't remember her. :))) They're so sweet. They really are. :DD
4White AlchemistThat was... bold of Melody to kiss him out in the open. XDDD I have a feeling he knows her but he doesn't remember her. :))) They're so sweet. They really are. :DD
10/27/2011 c30 1Laurel Valentine
WAHHHHHHHH!Chase might die! But knowing a good author like you does not kill off one of the main characters im okay! :)
1Laurel ValentineWAHHHHHHHH!Chase might die! But knowing a good author like you does not kill off one of the main characters im okay! :)
10/27/2011 c30 pbgurl
Wait so her family are demons? Is that how he swayed their minds, by turning them like he did Mel? I forgot that her mom mentioned something about the cruise earlier in the story.
Hmm, never suspected that Amarol and Chastity had something going on. Never would have guessed it.
NOO! Don't leave Chase! :(
So it looks like their idea worked but now I'm anxious to see what happened and how everything changes.
I LOVE all your stories but this is one of my top two favorites. It's different and unique from a lot of stories I've ever read.
-Liz :D
Wait so her family are demons? Is that how he swayed their minds, by turning them like he did Mel? I forgot that her mom mentioned something about the cruise earlier in the story.
Hmm, never suspected that Amarol and Chastity had something going on. Never would have guessed it.
NOO! Don't leave Chase! :(
So it looks like their idea worked but now I'm anxious to see what happened and how everything changes.
I LOVE all your stories but this is one of my top two favorites. It's different and unique from a lot of stories I've ever read.
-Liz :D