for Deadliest Catch11/8/2015 c5 
2Ri-chan27
TTTT WHY... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?
WHY WOULD YOU JUST STOP THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT AND DON'T CONTINUE FOR 4 YEARS... SNIFF WHY?
I'M LITERALLY CLOSE TO CRYING RIGHT NOW, SERIOUSLY. SO I BEG YOU
PLEASEEEE CONTINUE THIS...
PLEASE!
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND I THANK YOU FOR BRINGING THIS INTO MY LIFE, SO PLEASE CONTINUE...
2Ri-chan27TTTT WHY... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?
WHY WOULD YOU JUST STOP THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT AND DON'T CONTINUE FOR 4 YEARS... SNIFF WHY?
I'M LITERALLY CLOSE TO CRYING RIGHT NOW, SERIOUSLY. SO I BEG YOU
PLEASEEEE CONTINUE THIS...
PLEASE!
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL AND I THANK YOU FOR BRINGING THIS INTO MY LIFE, SO PLEASE CONTINUE...
12/23/2013 c5 2Andy.T
I'm really loving the story line, but there's one problem I keep running into. No matter how many times I refresh the page, I can't seem to find the button that takes me to the next chapter. I'm not sure what to do here, I'm freaking out.
Hehe, okay, in all seriousness, this is really great. Me likey. I really hope you'll update soon? Please? That would be almost as amazing as your writing talent.
XXXX Andy
2Andy.TI'm really loving the story line, but there's one problem I keep running into. No matter how many times I refresh the page, I can't seem to find the button that takes me to the next chapter. I'm not sure what to do here, I'm freaking out.
Hehe, okay, in all seriousness, this is really great. Me likey. I really hope you'll update soon? Please? That would be almost as amazing as your writing talent.
XXXX Andy
12/11/2012 c5 ohglob
Did you seriously leave us with a CLIFFHANGER? For several months?! I realize thou have a life outside of this but please, i'm dying to know what's next!
Did you seriously leave us with a CLIFFHANGER? For several months?! I realize thou have a life outside of this but please, i'm dying to know what's next!
10/26/2012 c5 4GrangerDanger333
Please come back and update! You MUST return to fp! This is such a brilliant start to the story. I love love love the plot and I want to read more!
I know I'm demanding but its only because you're an awesome writer and then you go and leave me alone with no more chapters :( I can't live like that!
Please? :)
4GrangerDanger333Please come back and update! You MUST return to fp! This is such a brilliant start to the story. I love love love the plot and I want to read more!
I know I'm demanding but its only because you're an awesome writer and then you go and leave me alone with no more chapters :( I can't live like that!
Please? :)
8/20/2012 c5 2BGPearl
I love this story! Please please. Please update soon! You can't leave us hanging with the cliff hanger D: ! XD
2BGPearlI love this story! Please please. Please update soon! You can't leave us hanging with the cliff hanger D: ! XD
1/22/2012 c5 1music.freaxxx
Oooh my gosh, girl. You musst update! I wish I had found this sooner! I just found this today and read it all in one sitting! Amazing, suspenseful, and soo good! I'm so happy that Asher found out, but I'm dying to know more! And I love Asher, but he seems kind of secretive, too; realllly want to know what that's about! Super excited to find out more, and reeeally hope you update soon! :D
1music.freaxxxOooh my gosh, girl. You musst update! I wish I had found this sooner! I just found this today and read it all in one sitting! Amazing, suspenseful, and soo good! I'm so happy that Asher found out, but I'm dying to know more! And I love Asher, but he seems kind of secretive, too; realllly want to know what that's about! Super excited to find out more, and reeeally hope you update soon! :D
11/9/2011 c4 2Keona Raynalise
WHERES THE PART YOU BEEN DYING TO WRITE? HUH? I DONT SEE IT RYAN. I THOUGHT THE BALL WAS ROLLING. Please? I want more gun kink! PLEASE? IF YOUR NOT GONNA FINISH THEN TELL ME HOW IT ENDS. ARGHWHKFN. I will send you candy. Update and I send you candy. Do you want candy? :]
2Keona RaynaliseWHERES THE PART YOU BEEN DYING TO WRITE? HUH? I DONT SEE IT RYAN. I THOUGHT THE BALL WAS ROLLING. Please? I want more gun kink! PLEASE? IF YOUR NOT GONNA FINISH THEN TELL ME HOW IT ENDS. ARGHWHKFN. I will send you candy. Update and I send you candy. Do you want candy? :]
9/30/2011 c5 anonymous
SO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN THIS REALLY COOL STORY!
SO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN THIS REALLY COOL STORY!
9/28/2011 c5 mj
This story is pretty good though the assassin meeting the Secretary of Defense directly is a bit laughable because politicians rarely implicate themselves though that can be passed off because Harley seems like an irregular choice for a killer.
I think my real problem with this story is Asher, he comes across as childish and annoying and his character flaws make him less loveable. Maybe its because you have him portrayed as immature and naive but I'm left to wonder what Harley sees in Asher.
This story is pretty good though the assassin meeting the Secretary of Defense directly is a bit laughable because politicians rarely implicate themselves though that can be passed off because Harley seems like an irregular choice for a killer.
I think my real problem with this story is Asher, he comes across as childish and annoying and his character flaws make him less loveable. Maybe its because you have him portrayed as immature and naive but I'm left to wonder what Harley sees in Asher.
7/21/2011 c5 Comorbidity
Oh my gosh.
I love you. Please marry me :U
Your stories are amazing. You are amazing. How you make everything adorable and realistic at the same time is amazing.
Oh my gosh.
I love you. Please marry me :U
Your stories are amazing. You are amazing. How you make everything adorable and realistic at the same time is amazing.
7/18/2011 c5 RR0renegade
update! you had to leave it with a cliffhanger? i can't wait your story is sooo good
update! you had to leave it with a cliffhanger? i can't wait your story is sooo good