
1/19/2011 c4
1The Moon Is My Sun
Aw, I hope Asher is ok. Can't wait for more! I love Inception and Burn Notice so I know I'll enjoy this story!

Aw, I hope Asher is ok. Can't wait for more! I love Inception and Burn Notice so I know I'll enjoy this story!
1/18/2011 c4 Juniper Cahill Grimm
GODDAMN. I HATE YOU. Wait. That's not true. I love you, far too much, and because of that, you should update faster. I NEED MORE INTERESINGNESS.
asdfghjl; God, you're an artist.
GODDAMN. I HATE YOU. Wait. That's not true. I love you, far too much, and because of that, you should update faster. I NEED MORE INTERESINGNESS.
asdfghjl; God, you're an artist.
1/18/2011 c4 Hyteha
Gosh, I can't wait for the next chappie. Asher finally found out . I don't know how I would have reacted if I were Asher. I think I might have freaked out xD
Gosh, I can't wait for the next chappie. Asher finally found out . I don't know how I would have reacted if I were Asher. I think I might have freaked out xD
1/18/2011 c4
1jag finns inte
Okay, either Asher got kidnapped or he was an idiot and went to warn the guy

Okay, either Asher got kidnapped or he was an idiot and went to warn the guy
1/18/2011 c4 Khalerx
Is Asher his enemy-assasin? Haha, badly worded, but I can't come up with any other conclusion other than Asher also being a spy.
Is Asher his enemy-assasin? Haha, badly worded, but I can't come up with any other conclusion other than Asher also being a spy.
1/17/2011 c4
54big.break.and.laryngitis
Okay. Literally, I of all people should have caught the Inception reference. But uh. No. I didn't. I mean, okay, you mentioned elevators and you said the word "deeper" and there was some line... that reminded me of Inception... but I don't know if it was a straight up reference. I can't remember what it was, but it was like, DID YOU THINK YOU COULD KEEP THIS A SECRET? or something and it reminded me of Ariadne in the lawn chairs in the warehouse but IDK if that's actually what you're referring to. SORRY THAT I SUCK.
Also. I want to say that when you asked that question on tumblr about how Person B should get kidnapped I knew it was going to be Ash. So. I guess I suck less than I thought I did.
ANYWAY GREAT SHIT ETC ILY ETC. :D Can't wait for more! (Etc.)

Okay. Literally, I of all people should have caught the Inception reference. But uh. No. I didn't. I mean, okay, you mentioned elevators and you said the word "deeper" and there was some line... that reminded me of Inception... but I don't know if it was a straight up reference. I can't remember what it was, but it was like, DID YOU THINK YOU COULD KEEP THIS A SECRET? or something and it reminded me of Ariadne in the lawn chairs in the warehouse but IDK if that's actually what you're referring to. SORRY THAT I SUCK.
Also. I want to say that when you asked that question on tumblr about how Person B should get kidnapped I knew it was going to be Ash. So. I guess I suck less than I thought I did.
ANYWAY GREAT SHIT ETC ILY ETC. :D Can't wait for more! (Etc.)
1/17/2011 c4
1MarmotYazik
Wo! You updated! :) I was hoping you hadn't abandoned the story, lol. Buut now Asher knows and he's DISAPPEARED! I bet Harley will get all super-assassin on his capturer and then... Harley will get in trouble and ASHER will help him! D:
Haha I'm probably way off :L

Wo! You updated! :) I was hoping you hadn't abandoned the story, lol. Buut now Asher knows and he's DISAPPEARED! I bet Harley will get all super-assassin on his capturer and then... Harley will get in trouble and ASHER will help him! D:
Haha I'm probably way off :L
1/17/2011 c4
2toinfinity
Eek, goddamn it Ahser! He is seriously too curious for his own good...
Oh well(: At least its getting very interesting!
Oh, I hope Asher is okay.. Im really wondering where he went. And I dont know why I feel the need to write this, but when they were in the restaurant and Harvey was ordering that wine? Ohmygod, I swear I sat there for like three minutes rereading that line over and over trying to pronounce it.
Hahahaha. Wow.
Anyway, lovely chapter, as always.
:D

Eek, goddamn it Ahser! He is seriously too curious for his own good...
Oh well(: At least its getting very interesting!
Oh, I hope Asher is okay.. Im really wondering where he went. And I dont know why I feel the need to write this, but when they were in the restaurant and Harvey was ordering that wine? Ohmygod, I swear I sat there for like three minutes rereading that line over and over trying to pronounce it.
Hahahaha. Wow.
Anyway, lovely chapter, as always.
:D
1/17/2011 c4
23firestar267
Is it wrong that there's a really sick part of me hoping he was kidnapped so you write an awesome rescue scene?
I hope he isn't like passed out in a bin somewhere or something, that would be anticlimatic.
Great as usual :D totally worth reading when I should be in bed :P

Is it wrong that there's a really sick part of me hoping he was kidnapped so you write an awesome rescue scene?
I hope he isn't like passed out in a bin somewhere or something, that would be anticlimatic.
Great as usual :D totally worth reading when I should be in bed :P
1/17/2011 c3
1MarmotYazik
Please please please carry this on! :') It's like, amazing.
And I really wanna read more haha :L [I promise I don't talk like this in real life x)]

Please please please carry this on! :') It's like, amazing.
And I really wanna read more haha :L [I promise I don't talk like this in real life x)]
1/7/2011 c3 MarieVerdonck
Nice story! Fun, yet exciting, just lovely :) I'd like to read more therefore I eagerly await your next chapter... xD
Athena
Nice story! Fun, yet exciting, just lovely :) I'd like to read more therefore I eagerly await your next chapter... xD
Athena
1/1/2011 c2 Lea
I LOVE INCEPTION. =O
And this story by the way. I feel bad for Asher. But Harley's a stud. Teehee.
I LOVE INCEPTION. =O
And this story by the way. I feel bad for Asher. But Harley's a stud. Teehee.
12/21/2010 c3
4Blo0d StaiNed Rose
soo far you are doing great...i love it...each chapter feels...complete (i dont know how to express it better) update as soon as possible please :):D

soo far you are doing great...i love it...each chapter feels...complete (i dont know how to express it better) update as soon as possible please :):D
12/17/2010 c3 firedraygon97
Haha, the title of the chapter fits so well! Poor Harley, having that confrontation in a coffee shop. I hope things work out. Lovely chapter!
~fd97
Haha, the title of the chapter fits so well! Poor Harley, having that confrontation in a coffee shop. I hope things work out. Lovely chapter!
~fd97