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9/11/2010 c2 Bug eye
its Lydia, by the way.

its not as bad as you think it is. a few punctuation changes and it would be fine. i like the idea of the differences in speech etc. that works :)

is the school based of lyneham? coz i was totally getting a lyneham vibe :D
9/5/2010 c1 YOU KNOW ME
Prolly, eh daughter? I have the power to tell my wife.

Next time I swear I will review properly. Really. Swear.
9/5/2010 c1 well obvously
i really like it :) you're a talented writer and please tell me when the next chaps up.

oh btw her father is annoying.but a good annoying because you've written him really well.

oh and i like the aussie mannerisms. i sometimes really hate writing for hp fanfic coz its all british talk like 'friut-loop' and 'balmy' the kind of things your great grandmother might say.

well done :) i really like it!

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