for Third Company: Alliance11/2/2010 c26 
9Mysterious MD
That was a well written, happy/sad update. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors in it. It's great to see Lani and Nikolaas in love, it makes things work out in the end for Lani. It's unfortunate how Dr. Farrow had betrayed them, and how Lani killed him. But it's a happy ending with Nikolaas and Lani together and happy. This was a great story, and I look forward to reading your next one. Keep up the great writing.
9Mysterious MDThat was a well written, happy/sad update. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors in it. It's great to see Lani and Nikolaas in love, it makes things work out in the end for Lani. It's unfortunate how Dr. Farrow had betrayed them, and how Lani killed him. But it's a happy ending with Nikolaas and Lani together and happy. This was a great story, and I look forward to reading your next one. Keep up the great writing.
10/30/2010 c25 tell it to the sky
yay they have finally told each other how they feel, took them long enough!
have a feeling that Animagia wont be too pleased to find her a Vamp again but they can deal!
yay they have finally told each other how they feel, took them long enough!
have a feeling that Animagia wont be too pleased to find her a Vamp again but they can deal!
10/26/2010 c25 Mysterious MD
That was a happy chapter, and we get to see the real emotions of both Nikolaas and Lani. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see them break through their real emotions, and I feel like you did a good job with it, you didn't rush for them to put out how they really feel. It was a well written chapter, and I look forward to reading your next update. Keep up the great writing.
That was a happy chapter, and we get to see the real emotions of both Nikolaas and Lani. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see them break through their real emotions, and I feel like you did a good job with it, you didn't rush for them to put out how they really feel. It was a well written chapter, and I look forward to reading your next update. Keep up the great writing.
10/21/2010 c24 Mysterious MD
That was an intense chapter. It was well written chapter, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was a good chapter, Nikolas came in and was captured. Vanessa is a traitor. And Lani is possibly dying after everyone came to save her and Nikolas. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.
That was an intense chapter. It was well written chapter, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was a good chapter, Nikolas came in and was captured. Vanessa is a traitor. And Lani is possibly dying after everyone came to save her and Nikolas. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.
10/18/2010 c23 Mysterious MD
That was a good chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was interesting, we see Calcon once again scheming away. And Lani is captured again, so it will be interesting to see if Nikolas does indeed come for her. I can't wait to read your next chapter, keep up the great writing. I thought this chapter was a particularly good one.
And I look forward to reading the third book in November.
That was a good chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was interesting, we see Calcon once again scheming away. And Lani is captured again, so it will be interesting to see if Nikolas does indeed come for her. I can't wait to read your next chapter, keep up the great writing. I thought this chapter was a particularly good one.
And I look forward to reading the third book in November.
10/18/2010 c22 tell it to the sky
its not out of the blue. something bad between them was going to have happen eventually. but I'm glad she has released that she loves Nikolaas. but her being kidnapped again! he needs to save her!
its not out of the blue. something bad between them was going to have happen eventually. but I'm glad she has released that she loves Nikolaas. but her being kidnapped again! he needs to save her!
10/17/2010 c22 Mysterious MD
It was an interesting chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It seemed perhaps a bit quick, but I think her realization was pretty well written. I look forward to seeing what you write next, keep up the good writing.
It was an interesting chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It seemed perhaps a bit quick, but I think her realization was pretty well written. I look forward to seeing what you write next, keep up the good writing.
10/16/2010 c21 Mysterious MD
Woah, that was a crazy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was definitely interesting, Nikolas calling off the marriage. And Lani trying to understand why. I feel like there are probably ulterior motives at play behind the situation. I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the good writing.
Woah, that was a crazy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was definitely interesting, Nikolas calling off the marriage. And Lani trying to understand why. I feel like there are probably ulterior motives at play behind the situation. I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the good writing.
10/13/2010 c20 9Mysterious MD
That was certainly an interesting chapter, with a worrisome ending. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see Nikolas and Lani getting along better, and Lani trying to be fair to Nikolas. The ending was interesting, I wonder what's up. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to your next update.
9Mysterious MDThat was certainly an interesting chapter, with a worrisome ending. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see Nikolas and Lani getting along better, and Lani trying to be fair to Nikolas. The ending was interesting, I wonder what's up. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to your next update.
10/11/2010 c19 Mysterious MD
Well that was a sad/happy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. And although it was depressing for Lani, having to see horrible things and fight people, and then being shunned, it was happier at the end, especially with her and Nikolas on better terms. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading what happens next.
Well that was a sad/happy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. And although it was depressing for Lani, having to see horrible things and fight people, and then being shunned, it was happier at the end, especially with her and Nikolas on better terms. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading what happens next.
10/11/2010 c19 2LadyFelton1994
no problem i was wondering bc i didnt reconzied the charatcers good job on that chapter
2LadyFelton1994no problem i was wondering bc i didnt reconzied the charatcers good job on that chapter