for The Journey11/9/2010 c21 
3dark-kissed-angel
I've really fallen for this story,I cant wait to see what comes next. will luc see jake one more time? will he have a fling with this cute chick? ohh i cant wait.
3dark-kissed-angelI've really fallen for this story,I cant wait to see what comes next. will luc see jake one more time? will he have a fling with this cute chick? ohh i cant wait.
11/8/2010 c21 APoetOfSorts
i like Coral alot more than i did Jake. she just seems like a better fit for Luc. however, i'm completely in love with Darius. even if he is being a dick right now :)
i like Coral alot more than i did Jake. she just seems like a better fit for Luc. however, i'm completely in love with Darius. even if he is being a dick right now :)
11/8/2010 c21 wonderland212
i like that Luc is interested in a girl and a girl that he actually likes b/c of her personaity and not just for her apperance. A little change is always a good thing.
i like that Luc is interested in a girl and a girl that he actually likes b/c of her personaity and not just for her apperance. A little change is always a good thing.
10/29/2010 c20 5Fallen Rayne
Well of course Luc only slept with Jake to get Darius jealous, but I think he actually started to like Jake though. Oh and I loved the chapter and when Darius was an ass I was like whoot! Haha can't wait for next chapter.
5Fallen RayneWell of course Luc only slept with Jake to get Darius jealous, but I think he actually started to like Jake though. Oh and I loved the chapter and when Darius was an ass I was like whoot! Haha can't wait for next chapter.
10/27/2010 c20 ricemidget
He probably did at first, but I think he genuinely like Jake now. Poor baby!
He probably did at first, but I think he genuinely like Jake now. Poor baby!
10/27/2010 c20 11dreamercrys
Well it could be both reasons. He likes Jake but also wanted to make Darius jealous too. Its a win win I think. But Darius doesn't have to be such an asshole about it... Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
11dreamercrysWell it could be both reasons. He likes Jake but also wanted to make Darius jealous too. Its a win win I think. But Darius doesn't have to be such an asshole about it... Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
10/27/2010 c20 7NoodleNation
Well, I finally got around to reading all three chapters (17-20) sorry I wasn't really in a reading mood so I'd put it off 'till now.
It's nice that we got a little back story on Luc's childhood. It explains why he's so abnormally skinny.
I feel really bad for Jake, but at the same time eh . . . not really. It was a really bad move of him, just having sex with Luc's THEN telling him that he was leaving. Like, if that was me I wouldn't even reply back to his text.
You did great in this chapter. There's a saying that if you get a man drunk then he'd tell you the truth and more, though I'm not sure if it's true.
I do think that Luc only gave Jake a shot because he was feeling lonely and sub-consciously he only had sex with Jake because in his own way he wanted to make Darius hurt. Just like everytime he and Dagmar would get together.
Hopefully this review motivated you. :) Oh, and looky! You now have 41 reviews. A huge accomplishment, eh? ;)
Until next time.
-Johnny
7NoodleNationWell, I finally got around to reading all three chapters (17-20) sorry I wasn't really in a reading mood so I'd put it off 'till now.
It's nice that we got a little back story on Luc's childhood. It explains why he's so abnormally skinny.
I feel really bad for Jake, but at the same time eh . . . not really. It was a really bad move of him, just having sex with Luc's THEN telling him that he was leaving. Like, if that was me I wouldn't even reply back to his text.
You did great in this chapter. There's a saying that if you get a man drunk then he'd tell you the truth and more, though I'm not sure if it's true.
I do think that Luc only gave Jake a shot because he was feeling lonely and sub-consciously he only had sex with Jake because in his own way he wanted to make Darius hurt. Just like everytime he and Dagmar would get together.
Hopefully this review motivated you. :) Oh, and looky! You now have 41 reviews. A huge accomplishment, eh? ;)
Until next time.
-Johnny
10/15/2010 c19 5Fallen Rayne
o.o I think I'm going to cry. That's so sad. SO we all know why Luc is thin now, but UGH SO DEPRESSING! Go post something happy not kay?
5Fallen Rayneo.o I think I'm going to cry. That's so sad. SO we all know why Luc is thin now, but UGH SO DEPRESSING! Go post something happy not kay?
10/15/2010 c19 klippie
a sweet little chapter :) it's nice to know a bit of Lucs background too.
Just one thing: the proper word would be 'dragi' when speaking to a boy, instead of 'draga'. Draga is feminine :)
a sweet little chapter :) it's nice to know a bit of Lucs background too.
Just one thing: the proper word would be 'dragi' when speaking to a boy, instead of 'draga'. Draga is feminine :)
10/14/2010 c18 Fallen Rayne
I love how one moment he was all like oh kiss Darius and than the next moment he was like OMG PHONE SEX. bi-polar much?
I love how one moment he was all like oh kiss Darius and than the next moment he was like OMG PHONE SEX. bi-polar much?
10/12/2010 c17 klippie
wow... that was hot!
Too bad Jake had to leave, I feel sorry for Luc :( but yeah, the story can't really continue with him there anyway.. haha :P
wow... that was hot!
Too bad Jake had to leave, I feel sorry for Luc :( but yeah, the story can't really continue with him there anyway.. haha :P
10/12/2010 c17 wonderland212
For your first lemon/smut that was pretty great...oh i wonder what's going to happen now that jake is gone. i feel so bad for Lucas
For your first lemon/smut that was pretty great...oh i wonder what's going to happen now that jake is gone. i feel so bad for Lucas