7/12/2012 c4 5J.D. Vincent
Love it so far :D I like the characters (they ever so slightly remind me of the kids in A Series of Unfortunate Events, but in a good way). I have only one criticism, which is that you spelt Alps wrong. Unless you were deliberately trying yo spell it the French way. :P
Love it so far :D I like the characters (they ever so slightly remind me of the kids in A Series of Unfortunate Events, but in a good way). I have only one criticism, which is that you spelt Alps wrong. Unless you were deliberately trying yo spell it the French way. :P
7/11/2012 c4 Raven555
Last one was from me, Raven555
Last one was from me, Raven555
7/11/2012 c4 Guest
Haha! I like this! Update soon please!
Ps. I like the title!
Haha! I like this! Update soon please!
Ps. I like the title!
7/11/2012 c4 1I-am-a-Firefly
hmm- if he looks best in low light, I bet he would look amazing if I just shut my eyes...
hmm- if he looks best in low light, I bet he would look amazing if I just shut my eyes...
6/29/2012 c3 Vicki Lawson
I'm confused! I thought Kai grew up to be the granny that almost takes over the world. But I guess Kai is actually the toddler in this story. Is Kai the grandmother who is trying to take over the world or is the grandmother who isn't Kai trying to take over the world?
I'm confused! I thought Kai grew up to be the granny that almost takes over the world. But I guess Kai is actually the toddler in this story. Is Kai the grandmother who is trying to take over the world or is the grandmother who isn't Kai trying to take over the world?
6/25/2012 c2 1I-am-a-Firefly
(O:
A floor to ceiling window?
Oh dear.
And I suppose the children will have to save the world by themselves now.
(O:
A floor to ceiling window?
Oh dear.
And I suppose the children will have to save the world by themselves now.
6/15/2012 c1 Talkingtimeisover
I LOVED this chapter! I loved the little lines the kids use, like 'Did she take a zimmer frame?' and all of the rest! :oD amazing!
I LOVED this chapter! I loved the little lines the kids use, like 'Did she take a zimmer frame?' and all of the rest! :oD amazing!
11/22/2011 c7 my poor toaster
Why werent the people blown apart too if a huge metal airplane was?
SUPER HUMANS!
Why werent the people blown apart too if a huge metal airplane was?
SUPER HUMANS!
11/22/2011 c3 my poor toaster
Favorite quote: "don't worry dad, if you die we promise we'll take care of the goldfish!"
That reminds me of te time when abby went to the hospital and me and my bff sarah went to get her a get well card. Sarah wrote nice stuff, and at the bottom i added 'and if you die, we get your laptop, right?' then i got so nervous that she'd actually died. I felt so guilty. :)
Favorite quote: "don't worry dad, if you die we promise we'll take care of the goldfish!"
That reminds me of te time when abby went to the hospital and me and my bff sarah went to get her a get well card. Sarah wrote nice stuff, and at the bottom i added 'and if you die, we get your laptop, right?' then i got so nervous that she'd actually died. I felt so guilty. :)
11/22/2011 c2 my poor toaster
My favorite quote is "sounded like an athsmatic pelican on tbe floor expiring."
You're from a different country than i am, and you sure do have an amazing vocabulary.
My favorite quote is "sounded like an athsmatic pelican on tbe floor expiring."
You're from a different country than i am, and you sure do have an amazing vocabulary.