for the granny who conquered the world1/8/2011 c19 Xevious Cat
"YE CAN TEK OOR LIVES, BUT YE CANNAE TEK OUR TROOSERS!" - Brilliant. I have a Scottish friend who I think might like to read this story, just for that line!
"YE CAN TEK OOR LIVES, BUT YE CANNAE TEK OUR TROOSERS!" - Brilliant. I have a Scottish friend who I think might like to read this story, just for that line!
1/8/2011 c12 Xevious Cat
Hahaha, Baked Beans ... ahh, I remember when I wrote a story about Baked Beans ... that was when I truly knew I had incurable mental problems ...
I'm really enjoying this story so far, so I'm just going to get back to reading it now ...
Hahaha, Baked Beans ... ahh, I remember when I wrote a story about Baked Beans ... that was when I truly knew I had incurable mental problems ...
I'm really enjoying this story so far, so I'm just going to get back to reading it now ...
11/27/2010 c3 PurpleInkBlot
"You are devoid, good sir, of any delicate nosie," Kai announced clearly and unexpectedly. "Thy nosie be a carbuncle on the face of the earth."... Yeah, Kai's my favorite.
"You are devoid, good sir, of any delicate nosie," Kai announced clearly and unexpectedly. "Thy nosie be a carbuncle on the face of the earth."... Yeah, Kai's my favorite.
11/27/2010 c2 PurpleInkBlot
Oh wow. Sounds like an interesting story to say the least. I like the parts where yuo are describing the 3 main characters, and after they read the note. Kai is my favorite!
Oh wow. Sounds like an interesting story to say the least. I like the parts where yuo are describing the 3 main characters, and after they read the note. Kai is my favorite!
11/21/2010 c2 
19Christian Baker
My god, this is funny. It had the classic makings of one of those childrens books that aren't actually for children. I love it.
One little thing to correct: the line that starts "Sorry, kids," should be joined with the line directly under it (in the universe and turn...) into one paragraph.
19Christian BakerMy god, this is funny. It had the classic makings of one of those childrens books that aren't actually for children. I love it.
One little thing to correct: the line that starts "Sorry, kids," should be joined with the line directly under it (in the universe and turn...) into one paragraph.
11/12/2010 c16 lymli
omc, they're so near and you just stopped there, I wanna stare/read what they're, I mean what is?
omc, they're so near and you just stopped there, I wanna stare/read what they're, I mean what is?
11/12/2010 c4 lymli
I like the us pay word here, aw, it's so cute since they're like still being children, but if I was like them I'd help my granny to take over the world, XD
I like the us pay word here, aw, it's so cute since they're like still being children, but if I was like them I'd help my granny to take over the world, XD
11/9/2010 c2 oolongnoodles
There are some mistakes on grammar and punctuation, so I suggest you clear those off. Other than that, it's great! Interesting beginning!
~CoruptionToday
There are some mistakes on grammar and punctuation, so I suggest you clear those off. Other than that, it's great! Interesting beginning!
~CoruptionToday
11/9/2010 c16 oolongnoodles
FUNNY! Keep updating and I gave you a review! So... keep updating!
~CoruptionToday
FUNNY! Keep updating and I gave you a review! So... keep updating!
~CoruptionToday
11/6/2010 c1 Guest
Legendary
Legendary
10/15/2010 c1 15dreamer-13
Wow. Wish I was this cool at the age of 7. I was too busy with being a comic book nerd. Oh, well... I have high hopes as I set out to read this... I am inspired to print on this sight the recallections of my dreams involving spontanious dance numbers... (seriously, leave you cd player/radio on at night - the dreams won't dissapoint)
15dreamer-13Wow. Wish I was this cool at the age of 7. I was too busy with being a comic book nerd. Oh, well... I have high hopes as I set out to read this... I am inspired to print on this sight the recallections of my dreams involving spontanious dance numbers... (seriously, leave you cd player/radio on at night - the dreams won't dissapoint)
10/9/2010 c1 RolandE
I didn't find it as funny as other readers might have but it's not that your story is bad. I liked how the children were stereotypical (baby genius, etc) and how the granny seems completely normal even as she was bent on returning the world to the 'good old days'. This is quite impressive for someone seven or eight years old but maybe it needs a little bit of a rewrite now that you're older. Just a suggestion.
I didn't find it as funny as other readers might have but it's not that your story is bad. I liked how the children were stereotypical (baby genius, etc) and how the granny seems completely normal even as she was bent on returning the world to the 'good old days'. This is quite impressive for someone seven or eight years old but maybe it needs a little bit of a rewrite now that you're older. Just a suggestion.