
3/19/2011 c5
13MADdreamers
I absolutely love your way of describing things in this poem. It's not something I would normally see and the way you write it goes so well together.
The third stanza and the line "My foe is the despised tick of time" are my favorite parts. If I could like every poem you wrote in this series I would. Fantastic job!

I absolutely love your way of describing things in this poem. It's not something I would normally see and the way you write it goes so well together.
The third stanza and the line "My foe is the despised tick of time" are my favorite parts. If I could like every poem you wrote in this series I would. Fantastic job!
3/19/2011 c4 MADdreamers
I really like this. This is definitely something relatable to everyone who has fallen in love. There are so many insecurities about if the person you love, loves you back. Great job and thanks for sharing.
I really like this. This is definitely something relatable to everyone who has fallen in love. There are so many insecurities about if the person you love, loves you back. Great job and thanks for sharing.
11/13/2010 c8
43losing oxygen
This is so heartwrenchingly sweet — because it's obvious there's going to be a bittersweet ending, but the words are so sweet, so open.
I love it.
xoxo.

This is so heartwrenchingly sweet — because it's obvious there's going to be a bittersweet ending, but the words are so sweet, so open.
I love it.
xoxo.
10/22/2010 c7 losing oxygen
Love it. Beautiful. Wonderful. Amazing. Awesome. :)
xoxo,
except dreaming isn't enough
(aka evanescent me)
Love it. Beautiful. Wonderful. Amazing. Awesome. :)
xoxo,
except dreaming isn't enough
(aka evanescent me)
10/6/2010 c1 lymli
that's true, there's love that really touch a piece of people and they'll remember forever.
that's true, there's love that really touch a piece of people and they'll remember forever.
9/8/2010 c1
51instant bliss
Simple, but perfect for it. I've just left my partner and moved halfway round the world, so this poem is very meaningful to me. Thanks for posting!

Simple, but perfect for it. I've just left my partner and moved halfway round the world, so this poem is very meaningful to me. Thanks for posting!