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12/22/2004 c1 6OneLitFirefly
They aren't metaphors, they are similes.

GREAT JOB! Keep writing, you do an excellent job at it!

You did very well with this poem. Crystal the Wonderful is pleased (but you can call me Crystal tha Amazing) haha j/k! (me...great...that'll be the day) ^_^*☼~Crystal~☼*
11/17/2004 c1 Hoemy
Sorry I don't review poems... wait a sec. I just did! darn it!
oh well, sic=nce I'm here already, I think you wrote this well, nice job.
5/19/2001 c1 4Solitaryrose
Oooh! Very pretty poem! Great images!
5/19/2001 c1 taioralover
Shimmer_satr, this is a really good poem! I like the metaphors. You compose more poems and post them up!

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