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12/25/2010 c5 1swamp13
pleasee update! (;
9/12/2010 c3 12Raised with Fangs
umm, ur chaps are kinda short, but i love it all the same! anyway, more with the mer-man yeah? cant wait for more, update soon!
9/10/2010 c2 8GermanSam
I do enjoy mermaid storys so I am interested to see where this goes. :)
9/10/2010 c2 2Aurora Clarte
wow, that merman really likes her, huh? ;)
9/10/2010 c1 Aurora Clarte
I really like the first chapter! It evokes really emotional feelings, and you really capture the heartache she feels, but also the way she tries to understand it all.

Great work!
9/10/2010 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
So is this like a prologue, or is the whole story going to be through these kinds of letters? Are they different ones, because if so, you might want to break them up.

Really great writing, you're very flowing in it. (and that was just proving that I'm not very flowing in it, and speak it real bad :P) It's intriguing, and makes me want to read know, I want to know the character, know what's happened, and who this Kali girl is, and what she did to her. You've opened a lot of mystery in this, so please update as soon as possible.

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