for Drabbles of Creative Writing3/18/2011 c4 triple vice
Booker + Mikey! Woot, woot! I wanna see more!
Booker + Mikey! Woot, woot! I wanna see more!
10/22/2010 c9 
1Midnight113
I really loved this particular piece, it was so sad especially the last stanza. Well done!
1Midnight113I really loved this particular piece, it was so sad especially the last stanza. Well done!
10/15/2010 c9 Toxic-noodle725
I love the poem about the phone. Creative and oh so sad.
I love the poem about the phone. Creative and oh so sad.
9/23/2010 c4 2Kassandra Duric
Well, I can't wait to see how this actually ends out.
I'd go with Brooker forgetting all about Cici and hooking up with Mikey, it seems they both secretly want to be more than friends any way. Cici seems like a bitch any way. lol
Hope you put the argument between both Cici and Brooker as well. That would be entertaining.
I think you should put more description on Eli, OZ and Cici.I know I would like to know more about them other than their eye color and hair color. I mean you brought them in strongly, whether that was intentional or not is another story, so just put a little more description in for them. Maybe even put in somewhere how everyone met.
Oh, and more about why Brooker's dad usually kicks him out. You mension his dad kicking him out, maybe you could just put one more little insident in there to enfasise on that part.
That's all I can see for now. If I remember more I'll just let you know on AIM. lol
2Kassandra DuricWell, I can't wait to see how this actually ends out.
I'd go with Brooker forgetting all about Cici and hooking up with Mikey, it seems they both secretly want to be more than friends any way. Cici seems like a bitch any way. lol
Hope you put the argument between both Cici and Brooker as well. That would be entertaining.
I think you should put more description on Eli, OZ and Cici.I know I would like to know more about them other than their eye color and hair color. I mean you brought them in strongly, whether that was intentional or not is another story, so just put a little more description in for them. Maybe even put in somewhere how everyone met.
Oh, and more about why Brooker's dad usually kicks him out. You mension his dad kicking him out, maybe you could just put one more little insident in there to enfasise on that part.
That's all I can see for now. If I remember more I'll just let you know on AIM. lol