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4/25/2013 c7 Demon Chic 101
Hey again,
I think personally this is much better than never unintentional. Longer chapters. Drama, a bit on the small side bt its nt too bad.
I'm nt good at picking out danker mistakes mostly because I think there should, be a few since its first, person and people these days, make grammer mistakes all the time.
Anywho is sam the sister from never unintentional
3/27/2012 c5 5poopforbrains
MORE! 3
3/21/2012 c3 poopforbrains
More please! It's incredibly good! 3 Can't wait for your next update. (:
9/18/2011 c1 3Rhapsodie
this story is so good, and so familiar. did you post this up here before?
9/18/2011 c2 1Atramento
Typo Alert: 'An I sitting on him?' should be 'Am I sitting on him?'

Other than that, nice chapter. It's good for him to see her with her feminine side. If Wil actually her boyfriend?
9/18/2011 c1 Atramento
Typo Alert: 'Hw I knew, I don't know.' should be 'How I knew, I don't know.'

The guy's a jerk...but I gotta say their partnership should be interesting. X)
2/9/2011 c1 Annarina
I loved this first chapter, Sam's character is so funny :D I hope you continue! :D

xx
9/15/2010 c1 Ground Shaking
I really like the idea and concept of this story. I think you should make the paragraphs and sentences flow more smoothly with each other but other than that it is a great story :)

4evRF

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