
9/30/2010 c1 Moon Sage
T.T OMG, I came to the end and I mourn the lack of the "next" button. :( A very intriguing chapter. I like the description of the house and the way you end it was a very nice touch. xD
T.T OMG, I came to the end and I mourn the lack of the "next" button. :( A very intriguing chapter. I like the description of the house and the way you end it was a very nice touch. xD
9/24/2010 c1
4L. Valdez
I'm really interested to see where this goes! Can't wait for your next update!

I'm really interested to see where this goes! Can't wait for your next update!
9/20/2010 c1 Eeliahs
I'm really intrigued by this story, it has the right amount of humour in it without taking away from the purpse of the story. your way with words is really descriptive and paints a clear picture when read. Great work!
I'll defintiely be sticking with this one.
happy writing.
Eeliahs
I'm really intrigued by this story, it has the right amount of humour in it without taking away from the purpse of the story. your way with words is really descriptive and paints a clear picture when read. Great work!
I'll defintiely be sticking with this one.
happy writing.
Eeliahs
9/18/2010 c1
2Ellieloo la Grimm
Wow, I'm really excited for this story. The originality that I'm reading already is awesome and I'm looking forward to the next chapter and finding out who this new mystery man is!

Wow, I'm really excited for this story. The originality that I'm reading already is awesome and I'm looking forward to the next chapter and finding out who this new mystery man is!
9/18/2010 c1
4Kangae no Hinansho
YES! i am so happy u posted this on . it makes it easier for me to keep track of the story. And liek i said on , you donnt end a chapter with a cliffy like that! (i'm one to be talking :P) Update soon please.

YES! i am so happy u posted this on . it makes it easier for me to keep track of the story. And liek i said on , you donnt end a chapter with a cliffy like that! (i'm one to be talking :P) Update soon please.