
5/11/2011 c15 Arabea
I seriously love this story! I think it's a little fast-paced, and everything kind of happens all at once, but the emotions shown by the characters are some of the most realistic and beleiveable I've seen in a long time. You have great characters - I wish I saw more of Storm, though. Towards the later chapters he just kind of fades into the background. I also like the world you've created, as well as everything technical that you've thought out. =) Keep up the great work!
I seriously love this story! I think it's a little fast-paced, and everything kind of happens all at once, but the emotions shown by the characters are some of the most realistic and beleiveable I've seen in a long time. You have great characters - I wish I saw more of Storm, though. Towards the later chapters he just kind of fades into the background. I also like the world you've created, as well as everything technical that you've thought out. =) Keep up the great work!
5/11/2011 c15 Bluecoco100
omgomgomg! You updated! I practically squealed! Love the chapter. I can feel the intensity and dark drama seeping through it! I love your great eye to detail and carefully structured plot! This is one hell of a story! All the mysteries and suspense is killing me! Please update soon! And don't leave us hangin' for that long.. I hold this story in a high regard from all the others on this site.
omgomgomg! You updated! I practically squealed! Love the chapter. I can feel the intensity and dark drama seeping through it! I love your great eye to detail and carefully structured plot! This is one hell of a story! All the mysteries and suspense is killing me! Please update soon! And don't leave us hangin' for that long.. I hold this story in a high regard from all the others on this site.
5/11/2011 c15 amelia
oh no, so she likes wolf boy now? :( noo storm will be so sad
oh no, so she likes wolf boy now? :( noo storm will be so sad
5/11/2011 c15 StormieDaze
You posted the story at 11:11! lol
You posted the story at 11:11! lol
5/10/2011 c15 September Stone
Zeke's brother? I did not see that comin, cant wait for the next update. Please keep up the great work! :)
Zeke's brother? I did not see that comin, cant wait for the next update. Please keep up the great work! :)
4/30/2011 c14 September Stone
I am really enjoying this story so far and hope you havnt given up on it jst yet. Please update asap! :)
I am really enjoying this story so far and hope you havnt given up on it jst yet. Please update asap! :)
4/27/2011 c14 bam
its been way too long! I need more! i reread like four chapters to satiate myself. hahaha, good work. you're an amazing writer. Very creative and just a little bit sexy ;)
its been way too long! I need more! i reread like four chapters to satiate myself. hahaha, good work. you're an amazing writer. Very creative and just a little bit sexy ;)
3/12/2011 c14 Alanisaur
Ah! Update! I love your story. But I wonder if this is gonna turn into a love triangle or square? (Including Kerr) LoL
Ah! Update! I love your story. But I wonder if this is gonna turn into a love triangle or square? (Including Kerr) LoL
2/22/2011 c14 The Imagination Addict
LOVED it so far! i really hv no feedback of any value. i LOVE ur writing style. love the characters. love the PLOT. gosh just LURVE it all. i cant wait for ur next chpt! dont keep me waiting too long! xD
LOVED it so far! i really hv no feedback of any value. i LOVE ur writing style. love the characters. love the PLOT. gosh just LURVE it all. i cant wait for ur next chpt! dont keep me waiting too long! xD