2/1/2011 c14 emem's
Ugh, I did not enjoy the Soren and Tegan make out session. I'm not a fan of Soren, though I'm not a fan of any of the males at this point, but I dislike Soren the most. And I'm disappointed that Tegan is turning out to be like many, many, MANY female protagonists that readily spread their legs when a horny guy mauls her. I thought she was stronger, classier, and generally, better than that. She was so cheap here, moaning like a porn-star and dry humping a guy she isn't even in love with (not like I want her to love Soren).

2/1/2011 c14 4L. Valdez
Let me start off by saying that this is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress! I've been with you since towards the beginning but I don't think I've ever reviewed. So, you definitely deserve a review now!

This chapter was great. I'm glad that the brothers seem to be mending their relationship, and it was good to see Soren opening up to his softer side more.

The scene at the end with Soren and Tegan was probably my favorite, and not just because I've been waiting for Soren and Tegan to realy kiss for a longg time, but also because of the humor that you added in.

"oh, Soren, get over here and ravish me, you big sex god, you." After reading this line, I startled my roommate by laughing out loud from across the room.

This chapter was great and I can't wait until your next update!

Thanks,

L.V. :)

1/27/2011 c13 1Charlee Rayne
I fucking love this story! It is now one of my favorites!

Please, please, please update soon! You should totally think about publishing it as a book to sell!

1/17/2011 c13 smurf love
wow i love the banter goin on in this story keep it up

1/14/2011 c13 Xandrea
I really liked this. Im sensing that this new housing arrangement is going to be pretty funny. I can't what for the next update. :)

1/13/2011 c13 Bluecoco100
How does one go from being extremely happy about the update and then completely depressed at the end? you always leave me wanting more and I love this story! I love tegan's compassion for the broken and lonely. She always looks on for everyone even though many turn their heads away from them. Kerr is great, I really like him but do I sense a triangle going on, or better yet, a square? There seems to be a lot of interests coming down Tegan's path. One being Storm and obviously Soren. Then Kerr comes along. Is he just for friendship? Hmm I wonder. A quad would be quite funny, I don't think I've seen that happen before but that would make things too complicating.

I loved the part with Soren and Tegan near the end. Even though he has no tact, he still makes me grin like an idiot with the stuff he says. He's adorable :) I like that he can be so mean, but so sweet at the same time. And at least he knows what he wants and goes straight to it. I knew he wouldn't stay away from tegan!

Anyways, great as always. Can't wait for your next update. I'll be here, eagerly awaiting like a fool.

1/13/2011 c12 Plus ou Moins
AMAZING story! Just read it all in one go- and I can't wait for the update! I hope it's soon!