for Waxing Gibbous12/7/2010 c1 Bluecoco100
I forgot to add something in my last review, but I wanted to know, why hasn't this story received a wide audience? Everybody should know about it! It's great :)
I forgot to add something in my last review, but I wanted to know, why hasn't this story received a wide audience? Everybody should know about it! It's great :)
12/7/2010 c10 Bluecoco100
I absolutely adore this story and it's also a nice break from studying :) Every single chapter I read, I'm left wanting more. Love your writing! update soon!
I absolutely adore this story and it's also a nice break from studying :) Every single chapter I read, I'm left wanting more. Love your writing! update soon!
12/7/2010 c10 WolfLover74
I'm glad Tegan got to meet her father, and her mother gave her what she needed to help Storm! Oh enter Kerr. I can't wait to see what role he plays into the story.
I'm glad Tegan got to meet her father, and her mother gave her what she needed to help Storm! Oh enter Kerr. I can't wait to see what role he plays into the story.
12/6/2010 c2 Ellybeth
You misspelled the word magic several times.
Also this sentence is incorrect. "You do not have to be afraid of me. And, no, I am not psychopathic. You will understand everything in time," he said.
It should either be “I am not psychotic” or “I am not a psycho”
Also...
"It worked on most people, even ones that were out of their goddamn minds." It is two words God damn.
You misspelled the word magic several times.
Also this sentence is incorrect. "You do not have to be afraid of me. And, no, I am not psychopathic. You will understand everything in time," he said.
It should either be “I am not psychotic” or “I am not a psycho”
Also...
"It worked on most people, even ones that were out of their goddamn minds." It is two words God damn.
12/6/2010 c10 SometimesG
Lovely update... I like Tegan meeting her parents and making her choice to stay and help the pack. It gives great insight to her character and why she wants to be a pack healer. Though I like Storm, I would like more Soren and Tegan interaction. Kerr's arrival seems to be timely.. either he is a friend or a foe.
Lovely update... I like Tegan meeting her parents and making her choice to stay and help the pack. It gives great insight to her character and why she wants to be a pack healer. Though I like Storm, I would like more Soren and Tegan interaction. Kerr's arrival seems to be timely.. either he is a friend or a foe.
111/26/2010 c9 WolfLover74
Oh Storm made it! I'm so happy he did. I like the relationship between Storm and Tegan. They're family, and they only have each other.
Oh Storm made it! I'm so happy he did. I like the relationship between Storm and Tegan. They're family, and they only have each other.
11/24/2010 c8 basilisk6
Storm is such a sweetie and I too missed him in this chapter. All we got was Soren. Ugh. Any chapter without him is a good chapter for me.
Storm is such a sweetie and I too missed him in this chapter. All we got was Soren. Ugh. Any chapter without him is a good chapter for me.
11/24/2010 c9 basilisk6
This was a really really good chapter. I love that Tegan and Storm are even closer now, and hopefully they will continue to do so, and eventually become a couple.
This was a really really good chapter. I love that Tegan and Storm are even closer now, and hopefully they will continue to do so, and eventually become a couple.
11/24/2010 c9 Bluecoco100
aww that was perfect! I really liked tegan and storm's connection in this chapter. It was so sweet. Keep updating as usual, this story is addicting :)
Happy thanksgiving!
aww that was perfect! I really liked tegan and storm's connection in this chapter. It was so sweet. Keep updating as usual, this story is addicting :)
Happy thanksgiving!
11/24/2010 c9 happy-drizzle
AWW! Storm is so so awesome! I love them together! so adorable:) keep writing!
AWW! Storm is so so awesome! I love them together! so adorable:) keep writing!
11/23/2010 c8 happy-drizzle
Wow. Seriously, just wow! What an awesome awesome story!
I love all of them! Storm is such a sweetheart and Soren is such a badass/sweetheart and Tegan is so cool! Im hooked! Keep writing!
Wow. Seriously, just wow! What an awesome awesome story!
I love all of them! Storm is such a sweetheart and Soren is such a badass/sweetheart and Tegan is so cool! Im hooked! Keep writing!
11/16/2010 c8 Bluecoco100
i hope storm is ok! his past life was so tragic! Despite everything, I actually want Tegan to end up with Soren. Storm reminds me of the brother/family type.
i hope storm is ok! his past life was so tragic! Despite everything, I actually want Tegan to end up with Soren. Storm reminds me of the brother/family type.