
12/11/2010 c7 Kale
Aw! I like Heartbeat! Good story! Keep it up! You're doing great!
Aw! I like Heartbeat! Good story! Keep it up! You're doing great!
11/22/2010 c6
30Mukuwa.Renu.Koi
Aw! Bravisimo I really loved this one! maybe cause I love If I Woke Up Next t o You hehe Coral and Jonas are just perfect! cant wait till your next update on IIWUNTY!

Aw! Bravisimo I really loved this one! maybe cause I love If I Woke Up Next t o You hehe Coral and Jonas are just perfect! cant wait till your next update on IIWUNTY!
11/21/2010 c6 except dreaming isn't enough
I LOVE IT! YES, BACKSTORY! Can't wait for more of the actual story. 3
xoxo.
I LOVE IT! YES, BACKSTORY! Can't wait for more of the actual story. 3
xoxo.
11/20/2010 c6 StripedSocksPrincess
I love this story so much! I want to read "If I woke up next to you" now! Its really good!
I love this story so much! I want to read "If I woke up next to you" now! Its really good!
11/20/2010 c6 CapablePoem759
OH, OH, OH! I JUST LOVED THAT! I'd say probably our best one yet, but they're all good! So there is no saying that! lol KEEP IT UP! I JUST LOVE THIS! I LOVE how you put the two stories together!
OH, OH, OH! I JUST LOVED THAT! I'd say probably our best one yet, but they're all good! So there is no saying that! lol KEEP IT UP! I JUST LOVE THIS! I LOVE how you put the two stories together!
10/23/2010 c4 Who else Kale lol
OH, HAHAHA I see the resemblance now! That's too cute! I L-O-V-E it! The way the put the song together just made it even better! Another great chapter! Keep it up...PLEASE!
OH, HAHAHA I see the resemblance now! That's too cute! I L-O-V-E it! The way the put the song together just made it even better! Another great chapter! Keep it up...PLEASE!
10/23/2010 c5
43losing oxygen
Aw. That was cute/cliche/funny. ANYWAY, I liked it.
xoxo.
(P.S, I just change my name a lot. lol.)

Aw. That was cute/cliche/funny. ANYWAY, I liked it.
xoxo.
(P.S, I just change my name a lot. lol.)
10/23/2010 c5 StripedSocksPrincess
lol! cute story! Not the ending I expected but it was still a good story! Update soon!
lol! cute story! Not the ending I expected but it was still a good story! Update soon!
10/4/2010 c3 Kale
I L-O-V-E-D it! Too good for words even!
IT'S JUST GREAT! I can really see how much they love each other and it was sweet how Jack stuck up for Holly and just how much he loves her he'd put himself in danger for her. I love it!
I'm trying to write a horror romance myself and I can't seem to figure out what to do for the couple since he is the horror, but your story really does give inspiration!
I L-O-V-E-D it! Too good for words even!
IT'S JUST GREAT! I can really see how much they love each other and it was sweet how Jack stuck up for Holly and just how much he loves her he'd put himself in danger for her. I love it!
I'm trying to write a horror romance myself and I can't seem to figure out what to do for the couple since he is the horror, but your story really does give inspiration!