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for just another disappointment

10/30/2013 c1 76Rhocar
Tragic, on so many levels, the loss, the judgment, the awakening. Wow
11/26/2010 c1 11HiddenFromYou
I'm really impressed with your writing so far. There's been very little wrong with it and it doesn't seem to matter what your write about, it's always going to be a strong, emotion prevoking piece of work.

There's a good and a bad side of not telling us what the bad situation is though. Good because it keeps the reader guessing, but bad because I was clamouring to know what happened. :P You probably got it right not telling us though.

-From the Review Marathon (check out the link in my profile)
9/25/2010 c1 495mate.feed.kill.repeat
I like the fact that this piece can be taken as either literally or as a metaphor. "I still remember the day I almost drowned."

I still remember the day I almost drowned... but it had nothing to do with a wave, or swimming, or water at all. Great work. I love it.

-stix-

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