for Trust Me3/21/2014 c6 Guest
Wonderfull story...please continue the chapters... .
i really want to read more... .
Wonderfull story...please continue the chapters... .
i really want to read more... .
3/16/2014 c6 lilly
Nice story...where the rest will come out?
Nice story...where the rest will come out?
1310/3/2012 c5 Taint.Revile.Elude
I am glad that Sondra has finally become a character I can read about and like. Can't say that I find her relatable but I no longer find her annoying, and I'm hoping that's just as well.
Kudos again, on another chapter.
I am glad that Sondra has finally become a character I can read about and like. Can't say that I find her relatable but I no longer find her annoying, and I'm hoping that's just as well.
Kudos again, on another chapter.
10/3/2012 c3 Taint.Revile.Elude
I don't understand how Loraine could tell Sondra's secrets to so many people. However, I've met people before like her so I get that she's just that sort of open character. It's still bothersome, of course.
I don't understand how Loraine could tell Sondra's secrets to so many people. However, I've met people before like her so I get that she's just that sort of open character. It's still bothersome, of course.
10/3/2012 c2 Taint.Revile.Elude
The characters, especially for the situation, are a tad stereotypical and I wish they weren't because it would make reading about them more enjoyable. Loraine is this ultra popular, ultra sweet, ultra bad-ass, straight-but-curious girl. Sondra is this abused, fragile, weak underling who knows who she is and feels that's all she has going for her. Simmer is a bitch for no reason, disliking a girl that her friend, whom she trusts, seems to care for. And there's that, Loraine's inexplicable fondness for Sondra. Anyhow, I'll continue to read on.
Kudos.
The characters, especially for the situation, are a tad stereotypical and I wish they weren't because it would make reading about them more enjoyable. Loraine is this ultra popular, ultra sweet, ultra bad-ass, straight-but-curious girl. Sondra is this abused, fragile, weak underling who knows who she is and feels that's all she has going for her. Simmer is a bitch for no reason, disliking a girl that her friend, whom she trusts, seems to care for. And there's that, Loraine's inexplicable fondness for Sondra. Anyhow, I'll continue to read on.
Kudos.
10/3/2012 c1 Taint.Revile.Elude
I don't know if you've realized this by now, or if someone has pointed it out already, but you referred to Loraine as brunette at some later point in this chapter. So far, I'm enjoying the story but... I'm not sure how I feel about the characters. I shall read further into it and see if how I feel changes at all.
Kudos on your first chapter, they are such a hassle to complete.
I don't know if you've realized this by now, or if someone has pointed it out already, but you referred to Loraine as brunette at some later point in this chapter. So far, I'm enjoying the story but... I'm not sure how I feel about the characters. I shall read further into it and see if how I feel changes at all.
Kudos on your first chapter, they are such a hassle to complete.
8/3/2011 c6 Nia Love
Wow! I hope that this is not the end! If it's not I really hope that yu finish it. I really like this story!
Wow! I hope that this is not the end! If it's not I really hope that yu finish it. I really like this story!
5/30/2011 c6 Ab
As much as I love TSHS, I wish you would finish so that you could update this one! I'm hoping and praying that you'll finish at all..because Loraine and Sondra need to end up together. It HAS to happen.
Also I noticed earlier in the chapters that you said Sondra was best friends with Tina for 6 years but then that they move every 3 years and that's when she met Tina? Something like that. And Loraine saying "I will main you." but I think she meant to say maim..
Anyway hope you update soon! Both TSHS and this one.
Sincerely, a usually silent reader
As much as I love TSHS, I wish you would finish so that you could update this one! I'm hoping and praying that you'll finish at all..because Loraine and Sondra need to end up together. It HAS to happen.
Also I noticed earlier in the chapters that you said Sondra was best friends with Tina for 6 years but then that they move every 3 years and that's when she met Tina? Something like that. And Loraine saying "I will main you." but I think she meant to say maim..
Anyway hope you update soon! Both TSHS and this one.
Sincerely, a usually silent reader
3/17/2011 c6 Anon723723723
Is this the end of the story? If so, nice job and I really loved this story. If not, please continue.
Is this the end of the story? If so, nice job and I really loved this story. If not, please continue.
12/19/2010 c6 MKW
this is a cool story. Down to earth. I really hope this isn't dead and that you continue this.
this is a cool story. Down to earth. I really hope this isn't dead and that you continue this.
11/14/2010 c6 Hali2010
Hell yea! She grew a backbone lol. Anyway, I LOVE this story so far! I REALLY hope you continue this and update 'cause it's an AMAZING story and it's too good to have it stopped here. So, GREAT job i look forward to you updating!XD
Hell yea! She grew a backbone lol. Anyway, I LOVE this story so far! I REALLY hope you continue this and update 'cause it's an AMAZING story and it's too good to have it stopped here. So, GREAT job i look forward to you updating!XD
9/26/2010 c6 DefendMyGirlsHonor
Man! This is pretty fuckin awesome! I love it already. Please upsate soon!
Man! This is pretty fuckin awesome! I love it already. Please upsate soon!