for My Eleventh10/13/2010 c7 cdyz
nice story, something different (not a the fully typical cliche storyline)
i love how brooke picked herself up again after getting heartbroken, but it's sad how she didn't end up with reed in the beginning.
never know though, i was rooting for patrick but now... maybe reed (even though there was history between reed and brooke, maybe he did fall for her ~.~)
anyways LOVE YOUR STORY
nice story, something different (not a the fully typical cliche storyline)
i love how brooke picked herself up again after getting heartbroken, but it's sad how she didn't end up with reed in the beginning.
never know though, i was rooting for patrick but now... maybe reed (even though there was history between reed and brooke, maybe he did fall for her ~.~)
anyways LOVE YOUR STORY
10/7/2010 c5 Toocoolforyou
L-l-l-loving it :D
Rooting for the Brooke+Patrick thing
Mr.Stone is soo right! Brooke needs to stop being a
player =.=
L-l-l-loving it :D
Rooting for the Brooke+Patrick thing
Mr.Stone is soo right! Brooke needs to stop being a
player =.=
10/4/2010 c4 
24Isabelle88
I'm a Patrick fan, I can tell he really loves her and I'm glad she considers him her best friend, I think the real story is between the two of them. Reed is annoying and I cant see him really changing, maybe this time Patrick will be the one to come out on top.
Brooke, i understand her wanting not to be that hurt girl anymore but geez she is out of control. I would love for her to see its not that bad to open her heart again and feel something.
24Isabelle88I'm a Patrick fan, I can tell he really loves her and I'm glad she considers him her best friend, I think the real story is between the two of them. Reed is annoying and I cant see him really changing, maybe this time Patrick will be the one to come out on top.
Brooke, i understand her wanting not to be that hurt girl anymore but geez she is out of control. I would love for her to see its not that bad to open her heart again and feel something.
10/2/2010 c3 Isabelle88
I don't know if I'm supposed to be but I feel bad for Patrick and kinda rooting for him. again I'm still confused on where you're going with this. Someone's gonna fall and I'm guessing it'll be Reed, I hope he suffers and she never forgives him for making her into a cold maneater.
I don't know if I'm supposed to be but I feel bad for Patrick and kinda rooting for him. again I'm still confused on where you're going with this. Someone's gonna fall and I'm guessing it'll be Reed, I hope he suffers and she never forgives him for making her into a cold maneater.
10/2/2010 c3 bitterdeath
I'm not going to lie, I read the little excerpt in the list of titles, and I thought oh its another player good girl cliche story. But I was bored so I started reading it. And I am really glad I did. This story is really good. I really like the way you've taken the old cliche and you're giving it a new face. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm not going to lie, I read the little excerpt in the list of titles, and I thought oh its another player good girl cliche story. But I was bored so I started reading it. And I am really glad I did. This story is really good. I really like the way you've taken the old cliche and you're giving it a new face. I can't wait for the next chapter.
9/28/2010 c2 9Kinjirareta Ai
Very good. Very well written. I am intrigued and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
9Kinjirareta AiVery good. Very well written. I am intrigued and I can't wait to find out what happens next.