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3/25/2013 c3 WP
Is the bride supposed to be blind? Sweet.
7/27/2011 c2 67moongazer7
an excellent story. I enjoyed it mostly thoughts but very interesting. kept me thinking and wondering.
7/27/2011 c1 moongazer7
interesting story first very cute then very exciting. I enjoyed the story quite well. I like the transition from smooth to rough. a very suttle but yet good transition. An interesting and traumatizing day especially for the boy. I wonder why the shot was fired. Good story over all!
12/24/2010 c3 50Kristina Suko
This is a really sweet piece. :) The only critique I have- in the first paragraph, you use "see" three times in close succession. I don't know if you meant it to be purposeful, but it kind of just felt repetitive.

Other than that, it was beautiful.
10/2/2010 c2 Kristina Suko
"The constellation of pink stars on his left forearm," - I know what you're going for, but it just sounds to me like he's got pink stars tattooed on his arm.

Otherwise, both these little snapshots are awesome! I love that they're just moments in time. Both made me want to read more, yet they are complete in themselves.

Good work.

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