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1/22/2014 c1 4Veronica Fay
This was beautifully written and very original!
1/4/2014 c1 4sami1995
this was very different poem (the writing style) but the words were incredibly effective and it was very suspenseful. great job.
5/22/2013 c1 2jinxylover25
I really enjoyed this. I'm not really big on poetry but this was very deep and moving. You're good at this :)
8/1/2012 c1 inactive account 1471
I'm raiding your page (finally). I've been meaning to for a while, so expect about five emails. I'm sorry in advance.

"Slip doubles...triples..." That was probably my favorite line in this whole poem. Very original. What I liked about the particular line made it seem as if "slip" was an object, maybe even a person. Open for interpretation, I hope.

Nice! It's a good first impression on your work.
9/29/2010 c1 2TheresaRayne
Keep up the awesome work! :D!

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