for Slipping1/4/2014 c1 
4sami1995
this was very different poem (the writing style) but the words were incredibly effective and it was very suspenseful. great job.
4sami1995this was very different poem (the writing style) but the words were incredibly effective and it was very suspenseful. great job.
5/22/2013 c1 2jinxylover25
I really enjoyed this. I'm not really big on poetry but this was very deep and moving. You're good at this :)
2jinxylover25I really enjoyed this. I'm not really big on poetry but this was very deep and moving. You're good at this :)
8/1/2012 c1 inactive account 1471
I'm raiding your page (finally). I've been meaning to for a while, so expect about five emails. I'm sorry in advance.
"Slip doubles...triples..." That was probably my favorite line in this whole poem. Very original. What I liked about the particular line made it seem as if "slip" was an object, maybe even a person. Open for interpretation, I hope.
Nice! It's a good first impression on your work.
I'm raiding your page (finally). I've been meaning to for a while, so expect about five emails. I'm sorry in advance.
"Slip doubles...triples..." That was probably my favorite line in this whole poem. Very original. What I liked about the particular line made it seem as if "slip" was an object, maybe even a person. Open for interpretation, I hope.
Nice! It's a good first impression on your work.