for Swimming in Rain5/8/2014 c24 Guest
On my goodness! This is my favorite story. I loved every part of it. Its just so sweet. :)
On my goodness! This is my favorite story. I loved every part of it. Its just so sweet. :)
1/26/2014 c22 sensitivegirl
your story is awesome. i loved it the moment i started reading the thing that i don't understand is that why most of authors are so prejudised against redheads and blonde females . Its rather disappointing. And i'm not either. other than that, good piece of work . Keep writing. You do a good job..:-)
your story is awesome. i loved it the moment i started reading the thing that i don't understand is that why most of authors are so prejudised against redheads and blonde females . Its rather disappointing. And i'm not either. other than that, good piece of work . Keep writing. You do a good job..:-)
8/29/2013 c2 Guest
This chapter, at least the party bit, positively REEKS of Pride and Prejudice it's insane. The 'do you dance Aiden?' and the reply in the negative? I don't know if I'm just an English Lit enthusiast imagining parallels here or what but I'm liking this story so far
This chapter, at least the party bit, positively REEKS of Pride and Prejudice it's insane. The 'do you dance Aiden?' and the reply in the negative? I don't know if I'm just an English Lit enthusiast imagining parallels here or what but I'm liking this story so far
7/19/2013 c5 TK Johnson
This is good so far but this chapter disturbs me slightly. I understand a nod toward Pride & Prejudice but this is too similar...this whole chapter borders on Plagiarism. Also I understand that they're British but this is set in the 2000s. I have yet to meet a modern day 20 something Brit that speaks the way that they did in this chapter. This story could be lovely, but I encourage you to let your characters have their own mistakes, adventures, and obstructions. We as readers can understand the nod to dear old Jane with out being beat over the head with it.
This is good so far but this chapter disturbs me slightly. I understand a nod toward Pride & Prejudice but this is too similar...this whole chapter borders on Plagiarism. Also I understand that they're British but this is set in the 2000s. I have yet to meet a modern day 20 something Brit that speaks the way that they did in this chapter. This story could be lovely, but I encourage you to let your characters have their own mistakes, adventures, and obstructions. We as readers can understand the nod to dear old Jane with out being beat over the head with it.
2/5/2013 c8 
1A-new-colour
Oh. I see now. It's a modern day version of pride and prejudice!
That is so cool!
You're really great :D
1A-new-colourOh. I see now. It's a modern day version of pride and prejudice!
That is so cool!
You're really great :D
2/4/2013 c5 A-new-colour
okayyy... pride and prejudice references
here they are
ronnie: elizabeth
aiden: mr. darcy
kiera: jane
stephen: Mr. bingley
farrah: ms. bingley
george (I'm guessing) : mr wickham
and aiden's line when the girls were walking around the room were nearly the same as darcy's!
seriously?
its good but im more or less predicting the incidents before the happen
okayyy... pride and prejudice references
here they are
ronnie: elizabeth
aiden: mr. darcy
kiera: jane
stephen: Mr. bingley
farrah: ms. bingley
george (I'm guessing) : mr wickham
and aiden's line when the girls were walking around the room were nearly the same as darcy's!
seriously?
its good but im more or less predicting the incidents before the happen
2/4/2013 c4 A-new-colour
woah... a lot of pride and prejudice similarities here
whatever.. this is good :)
woah... a lot of pride and prejudice similarities here
whatever.. this is good :)
11/11/2012 c16 Megan
Hey I really like this story - it reminds me of a similar plot to Austen's Pride and Prejudice... just a thought.
Hey I really like this story - it reminds me of a similar plot to Austen's Pride and Prejudice... just a thought.
8/27/2012 c14 3TO-OLazyToLogin
So, how do you pronounce Aiden's surname?
Is it Mc- Fad- Yen (like how its spelt)?
Or is it meant ro rhyme with Aiden? So Mc- Fay- Den?
3TO-OLazyToLoginSo, how do you pronounce Aiden's surname?
Is it Mc- Fad- Yen (like how its spelt)?
Or is it meant ro rhyme with Aiden? So Mc- Fay- Den?