for Gunpoint Romance1/9/2013 c1 
4ImmanenceEnsured
This is wonderful and brilliant:) You so smartly describe this feeling of being trapped, and a person making you unhappy, because otherwise they themselves become unhappy, not realizing they already are. This was such a cool little oneshot.
4ImmanenceEnsuredThis is wonderful and brilliant:) You so smartly describe this feeling of being trapped, and a person making you unhappy, because otherwise they themselves become unhappy, not realizing they already are. This was such a cool little oneshot.
7/31/2011 c1 the0z3452
this was amazing. i got confused at the end on whether he shot himself or he shot his 'lover.' but it was beautifully written and i love how the ending is unsure.
this was insanely beautiful.
this was amazing. i got confused at the end on whether he shot himself or he shot his 'lover.' but it was beautifully written and i love how the ending is unsure.
this was insanely beautiful.
12/6/2010 c1 RandomReveiwer
wow. heavy.
wow. heavy.
10/23/2010 c1 8TinaLouise
My first thought at reaching the end was "Woah". You did a great job with this one. It's powerful and moving while leaving the reader a bit unsure of what exactly happened.
This is going on my fav list and staying there.
8TinaLouiseMy first thought at reaching the end was "Woah". You did a great job with this one. It's powerful and moving while leaving the reader a bit unsure of what exactly happened.
This is going on my fav list and staying there.
10/1/2010 c1 3Reese Weston
Powerful. This was my favorite bit: "A lifetime in their prison is infinitely better than a lifetime in his."
Loving the way you used repetition in this. Great job-short and to the point.
3Reese WestonPowerful. This was my favorite bit: "A lifetime in their prison is infinitely better than a lifetime in his."
Loving the way you used repetition in this. Great job-short and to the point.
10/1/2010 c1 287Archia
I was reading this and at no point did I expect what happened. I really like how you repeat 'he isn't nice' alot, especially at the end. There's some really good descriptiveness and I really enjoyed this. Well done. I want to say more about how good this is but I'm not really sure what to say.
287ArchiaI was reading this and at no point did I expect what happened. I really like how you repeat 'he isn't nice' alot, especially at the end. There's some really good descriptiveness and I really enjoyed this. Well done. I want to say more about how good this is but I'm not really sure what to say.