for Cierna Anjel2/13/2011 c2 Pandieshortie
Blae soundes SMEXY! haha.. :D
Like this story.. Update soon [OR ELSE]
haha jk.. :D
-Pandieshortie
Blae soundes SMEXY! haha.. :D
Like this story.. Update soon [OR ELSE]
haha jk.. :D
-Pandieshortie
2/13/2011 c2 
10Keagan of Rohan
I really like this. I really do.
Although, I'm not sure how some of their names are pronounced, so dedicating an author's note to that would be nice.
Also, the chapters should be longer; for example, in chapter one, you could explain what happened inbetween her going unconcious and waking.
10Keagan of RohanI really like this. I really do.
Although, I'm not sure how some of their names are pronounced, so dedicating an author's note to that would be nice.
Also, the chapters should be longer; for example, in chapter one, you could explain what happened inbetween her going unconcious and waking.
12/28/2010 c2 Sonyashinto
This story has me interested in it, but the chapters are too short. I think you should make them a little more longer.
Everything else about the story i think is very good and I'm really looking forward to much more of the story.
Please Update soon!
Ja-Ne =^_^=
This story has me interested in it, but the chapters are too short. I think you should make them a little more longer.
Everything else about the story i think is very good and I'm really looking forward to much more of the story.
Please Update soon!
Ja-Ne =^_^=