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2/13/2011 c2 Pandieshortie
Blae soundes SMEXY! haha.. :D

Like this story.. Update soon [OR ELSE]

haha jk.. :D

2/13/2011 c2 10Keagan of Rohan
I really like this. I really do.

Although, I'm not sure how some of their names are pronounced, so dedicating an author's note to that would be nice.

Also, the chapters should be longer; for example, in chapter one, you could explain what happened inbetween her going unconcious and waking.
12/28/2010 c2 Sonyashinto
This story has me interested in it, but the chapters are too short. I think you should make them a little more longer.

Everything else about the story i think is very good and I'm really looking forward to much more of the story.

Please Update soon!

Ja-Ne =^_^=
12/28/2010 c2 horse4ever
please write more as the story is good so far!

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