
9/11/2011 c1
3Choseporfante
How depressing, but it is something that a minority - or rather, major minority - kids go through... So depressing.

How depressing, but it is something that a minority - or rather, major minority - kids go through... So depressing.
10/20/2010 c1
41MyNameIsDave
This is a very gripping piece. Death and Depression go hand in hand, best friends, and they like to work together.
You lost me at, "no calamitous diagnosis of some incurable maladay"...

This is a very gripping piece. Death and Depression go hand in hand, best friends, and they like to work together.
You lost me at, "no calamitous diagnosis of some incurable maladay"...
10/12/2010 c1
1backseat compromises
I liked how you personified Depression and Death and I swear my heart beat faster when she started cutting. Sounded very painful and I like the vocab you're using here. Good work here.

I liked how you personified Depression and Death and I swear my heart beat faster when she started cutting. Sounded very painful and I like the vocab you're using here. Good work here.
10/5/2010 c1
16saamf 44
Oh wow. I don't know why but I feel like I've heard this story before. Not a story in words, but in my mind or something. Very creepy and addicting. I especially like the intro.
The nameless thing reminds me of what I thought was one of Roald Dahl's books, but I can't seem to figure out which book, so it might not be him. Anyways, the author never mentioned the main character's name, but it didn't affect the quality of the story.
I feel like I'm rambling, but I really like it!:D

Oh wow. I don't know why but I feel like I've heard this story before. Not a story in words, but in my mind or something. Very creepy and addicting. I especially like the intro.
The nameless thing reminds me of what I thought was one of Roald Dahl's books, but I can't seem to figure out which book, so it might not be him. Anyways, the author never mentioned the main character's name, but it didn't affect the quality of the story.
I feel like I'm rambling, but I really like it!:D
10/3/2010 c1
9Chariline
I can imagine it took eons! xD Did you get to find all these words dictionary-surfing or what?
But I like them. Even though I don't really understand most of the words, I still got the general meaning of them, ha ha.
And even though she doesn't have a name doesn't she mean she isn't based off of someone. :)
Hearts, Chari!

I can imagine it took eons! xD Did you get to find all these words dictionary-surfing or what?
But I like them. Even though I don't really understand most of the words, I still got the general meaning of them, ha ha.
And even though she doesn't have a name doesn't she mean she isn't based off of someone. :)
Hearts, Chari!