for All the World's A Stage6/15/2012 c1 
13Nanumi
Sorry I can't be more detailed than this; loved it. Your attention to detail really makes this a good read.
13NanumiSorry I can't be more detailed than this; loved it. Your attention to detail really makes this a good read.
11/21/2010 c2 10BusyBee317
I'm terribly sorry for leaving it so long to review. I hope you can forgive me? :)
Wow, this is just as gripping and amazing chapter as the last!You are an excellent writer and your style of writing is amazing! The characters and the plotline are incredibly interesting and intriguing. I really cannot wait until you submit the next chapter and I promise to review quicker next time.
p.s. I haven't improved on my reviewing skills.
10BusyBee317I'm terribly sorry for leaving it so long to review. I hope you can forgive me? :)
Wow, this is just as gripping and amazing chapter as the last!You are an excellent writer and your style of writing is amazing! The characters and the plotline are incredibly interesting and intriguing. I really cannot wait until you submit the next chapter and I promise to review quicker next time.
p.s. I haven't improved on my reviewing skills.
10/21/2010 c1 BusyBee317
Wow, this is a really gripping story. I wish that I could give a review as good as your story, but I am afraid that that is highly unlikely because my reviews are always rather mediocre. I like the concept, and it's really quite an amazing piece of writing. In fact, I'd give anything to write half as well as you can. I like the characterisation, and I am highly impressed with your writing, and will definitely read more of your works in the future.
(I love the title, and therefore the William Shakespeare quote. William Shakespeare was truly amazing, so this is very nicely done.)
p.s. I told you I was bad at reviewing :P
Wow, this is a really gripping story. I wish that I could give a review as good as your story, but I am afraid that that is highly unlikely because my reviews are always rather mediocre. I like the concept, and it's really quite an amazing piece of writing. In fact, I'd give anything to write half as well as you can. I like the characterisation, and I am highly impressed with your writing, and will definitely read more of your works in the future.
(I love the title, and therefore the William Shakespeare quote. William Shakespeare was truly amazing, so this is very nicely done.)
p.s. I told you I was bad at reviewing :P
10/15/2010 c1 2Elsbeth Lagrange
I like your style! I thought the grimness of your future marries nicely with your sense of humour. I did notice a couple of little things ("bag of tricks" used more than once in quick succession, a typo here and there) but I was impressed by your research and characterization.
2Elsbeth LagrangeI like your style! I thought the grimness of your future marries nicely with your sense of humour. I did notice a couple of little things ("bag of tricks" used more than once in quick succession, a typo here and there) but I was impressed by your research and characterization.
10/7/2010 c1 5Twisted Skys
I really like this, and wish I could give a better review at this time. I really want this to continue. I found it both intriguing and comical at the same time. Please update this, and I promise I will leave a better review next time.
5Twisted SkysI really like this, and wish I could give a better review at this time. I really want this to continue. I found it both intriguing and comical at the same time. Please update this, and I promise I will leave a better review next time.
10/6/2010 c1 3John Wolfe
Very interesting concepts. I love the shout-outs you've done through the character names. The only thing I didn't like was Sgt. McGregor's line about the nuclear disarmament resolution in the beginning. It felt pretty forced.
You should go into more detail about what's happened: why are there Farsi-speaking soldiers in Eastern Europe? Why is the Papal state fighting the UN. How did they get so evil? Stuff like that. Looking forward to the next chapter!
3John WolfeVery interesting concepts. I love the shout-outs you've done through the character names. The only thing I didn't like was Sgt. McGregor's line about the nuclear disarmament resolution in the beginning. It felt pretty forced.
You should go into more detail about what's happened: why are there Farsi-speaking soldiers in Eastern Europe? Why is the Papal state fighting the UN. How did they get so evil? Stuff like that. Looking forward to the next chapter!