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11/17/2010 c1 15hero.complex
I love the rhyme scheme, it lightens an otherwise difficult subject to write about. My favorite lines are: "until that is the eventual downfall" and "you won the stage, now take your bow". You carry the motif of a performance very well throughout the poem. Excellent piece.

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