for Discontinued Version of Tainted Blood7/20/2012 c2 
10Daisy02
I really, really, really feel like I've read this before but I can't remember when...-_- I started on the revised version, I think a long time ago I read this one, but I love the unicorn part that was hilarious.
10Daisy02I really, really, really feel like I've read this before but I can't remember when...-_- I started on the revised version, I think a long time ago I read this one, but I love the unicorn part that was hilarious.
7/12/2012 c135 ShadeAngel
this story is awesome, i have followed this story for awhile now and i will read the new one as well.
this story is awesome, i have followed this story for awhile now and i will read the new one as well.
7/11/2012 c135 Tori and Saria
You mean . . . it's over?
WHY? WHY?
Okay, whatever. Ahem.
So, like, I (actually, we) think that you should still keep this story up for future ref, but if the new version of Tainted Blood is going to have the same title, you should change the title of this one because when you submit two stories with the same name, the site's gonna block it.
So yeah, that's all. Hope it comes out soon, we guess . . .
-T&S
You mean . . . it's over?
WHY? WHY?
Okay, whatever. Ahem.
So, like, I (actually, we) think that you should still keep this story up for future ref, but if the new version of Tainted Blood is going to have the same title, you should change the title of this one because when you submit two stories with the same name, the site's gonna block it.
So yeah, that's all. Hope it comes out soon, we guess . . .
-T&S
7/10/2012 c1 4hanniahisbananaz
Great start, I like the sound of this story; I like how it starts off with action. Can't wait to see what happens next!
4hanniahisbananazGreat start, I like the sound of this story; I like how it starts off with action. Can't wait to see what happens next!
7/9/2012 c134 Saria
Ren's funny as hell! Haha duckies... I thought Kain would be a little nicer. Didn't think he was an asshole. Very uncharacteristic...
Didn't know vamps made truces with demons.
Hope Seth gets saved!
Ren's funny as hell! Haha duckies... I thought Kain would be a little nicer. Didn't think he was an asshole. Very uncharacteristic...
Didn't know vamps made truces with demons.
Hope Seth gets saved!
7/9/2012 c134 Tori
Yay... There's still hope... I think so anyways. Loki, come baaaaackkk! Nothin else to say.
Yay... There's still hope... I think so anyways. Loki, come baaaaackkk! Nothin else to say.
7/8/2012 c133 Lilly's Scribble
Well I'd like to say that at first I was a bit skeptical but it was the humor in this story that kept me reading. I liked how later the story developed serious themes and more intense subjects as the heroine had Many people she lived get taken away from her.
Well I'd like to say that at first I was a bit skeptical but it was the humor in this story that kept me reading. I liked how later the story developed serious themes and more intense subjects as the heroine had Many people she lived get taken away from her.
7/6/2012 c7 3Searchingformyheart
Honestly, I've only read 7 chapters, but I feel like you introduce new characters WAY too fast. There's like no plot development at all yet, only random people popping out to save the heroine. Which brings me to my other point. She's the HEROINE, isn't she? Why is she getting saved by random people? None of this seems to make too much sense yet...However, the idea is original, but I feel like you could develop the story in a more interesting way...I'll keep reading but I'm not too interested.
3SearchingformyheartHonestly, I've only read 7 chapters, but I feel like you introduce new characters WAY too fast. There's like no plot development at all yet, only random people popping out to save the heroine. Which brings me to my other point. She's the HEROINE, isn't she? Why is she getting saved by random people? None of this seems to make too much sense yet...However, the idea is original, but I feel like you could develop the story in a more interesting way...I'll keep reading but I'm not too interested.
7/5/2012 c133 Guest
Okay, Tori was about to say, Kain VS Ren would be fun, but she accidentally touched the review button too soon... She uses a touch screen phone so yeah.
Anyways
I still think Nero's a funny name. Other than that I'm in love with Loki all over again... Hope auryn snaps stark back so I can fall in love with him again as well. Lol, Caleb's sweet.
Saria (btw the review below was Tori's)
Okay, Tori was about to say, Kain VS Ren would be fun, but she accidentally touched the review button too soon... She uses a touch screen phone so yeah.
Anyways
I still think Nero's a funny name. Other than that I'm in love with Loki all over again... Hope auryn snaps stark back so I can fall in love with him again as well. Lol, Caleb's sweet.
Saria (btw the review below was Tori's)
7/5/2012 c133 Guest
Stark! You need to snap back to your senses!
Why is Stark always falling for the tricks? He let the stupid vampire blade control him, that idiot girl with the flower, and now Radon. Omg.
Loki... Hm, glad my favorite character's still got his winning charm! Lol. Lil needs to give it a break ...
Can't wait to see what happened to Alana and Arie and the other immortal hunters!
Ezio looks fine ... Yey an ally! Seth ... U BROKE LIL'S FUCKING FOOT! My feet are MY winning charm, believe it or not ... Always fresh and painted...
Kain
Stark! You need to snap back to your senses!
Why is Stark always falling for the tricks? He let the stupid vampire blade control him, that idiot girl with the flower, and now Radon. Omg.
Loki... Hm, glad my favorite character's still got his winning charm! Lol. Lil needs to give it a break ...
Can't wait to see what happened to Alana and Arie and the other immortal hunters!
Ezio looks fine ... Yey an ally! Seth ... U BROKE LIL'S FUCKING FOOT! My feet are MY winning charm, believe it or not ... Always fresh and painted...
Kain
7/5/2012 c132 Guest
Oh gosh, Fictionpress is being an ass right now so we'll both have to send you one review . . .
1) YAY! Caleb's alive!
2) Ren seems like a fun person! Keep him around and see how things play, though I am curious as to why he wants Alana dead. Maybe its because she didn't want to kill Lillie?
3) Seth . . . well since Lillie's been having things on her mind its really hard to go after someone whose stuck in hell.
4) Hope Stark, Kain, Riku, Kaden, Alana and Loki meet up soon . . . Ren may be a possible friend. And where's Alana anyways?
Tori&Saria
Oh gosh, Fictionpress is being an ass right now so we'll both have to send you one review . . .
1) YAY! Caleb's alive!
2) Ren seems like a fun person! Keep him around and see how things play, though I am curious as to why he wants Alana dead. Maybe its because she didn't want to kill Lillie?
3) Seth . . . well since Lillie's been having things on her mind its really hard to go after someone whose stuck in hell.
4) Hope Stark, Kain, Riku, Kaden, Alana and Loki meet up soon . . . Ren may be a possible friend. And where's Alana anyways?
Tori&Saria
7/5/2012 c11 Mrs.Moustache
Oh jeez , i still have so many chapters left...yay! I can't stop reading! I really love it so far!
Oh jeez , i still have so many chapters left...yay! I can't stop reading! I really love it so far!
7/3/2012 c131 Guest
the post thing is like, next time on dragonballZ! at least it way better then that.
the post thing is like, next time on dragonballZ! at least it way better then that.
7/2/2012 c4 7XxmikoxkogaxX
I love the first 3 chapters :)
Imma keep reading but it's a lot lol
Lillie is a very interesting character as well and can't wait to read more :)))
7XxmikoxkogaxXI love the first 3 chapters :)
Imma keep reading but it's a lot lol
Lillie is a very interesting character as well and can't wait to read more :)))
7/2/2012 c131 Guest
Poor Seth... I bet he feels betrayed by Lillie and lied to... I'm more of a compassionate soul than Tori, lol. She's got a thing against Seth for breaking Lil's foot.
Hmm, that man obviously seems like the villain... Maybe it's Nero... That's a funny name... Nero.
Lokiiiiii! You're baaaccckkk! I wanna hug you to death but I don't want you to dieee!
Now I just need Stark and Caleb back so then I can hug them too! And crush them with my bear hug... Hahaha.
Gimme cAkE! YAY!
Update soon.
;) Saria
Poor Seth... I bet he feels betrayed by Lillie and lied to... I'm more of a compassionate soul than Tori, lol. She's got a thing against Seth for breaking Lil's foot.
Hmm, that man obviously seems like the villain... Maybe it's Nero... That's a funny name... Nero.
Lokiiiiii! You're baaaccckkk! I wanna hug you to death but I don't want you to dieee!
Now I just need Stark and Caleb back so then I can hug them too! And crush them with my bear hug... Hahaha.
Gimme cAkE! YAY!
Update soon.
;) Saria