for Discontinued Version of Tainted Blood10/29/2011 c52 booklover1698
I likey! Update soon, and read my story Not So Devil, So To Speak, please, it's really good!
I likey! Update soon, and read my story Not So Devil, So To Speak, please, it's really good!
10/26/2011 c1 
8Dark Sleep
Lol, I like Stark the most right now. So interesting, I'll definetly read the rest. Good job...!
8Dark SleepLol, I like Stark the most right now. So interesting, I'll definetly read the rest. Good job...!
10/22/2011 c48 1The Pioneer Cat
Woah... this took quite some time to read, but it was worth it. Personally i loved this story. I think it has a good plot and i like you're characters very much. I have to say, well done on sticking with this story so much. It's really impressive! It's one of the best stories i've read on this site for a while now! ;)
1The Pioneer CatWoah... this took quite some time to read, but it was worth it. Personally i loved this story. I think it has a good plot and i like you're characters very much. I have to say, well done on sticking with this story so much. It's really impressive! It's one of the best stories i've read on this site for a while now! ;)
9/5/2011 c1 5Thundy
I really like this story lol
I'm still only on the first chapter but I'm hooked xD
Oh yeah, can you read my story too? It's new, but it's kind of similar to this story.
5ThundyI really like this story lol
I'm still only on the first chapter but I'm hooked xD
Oh yeah, can you read my story too? It's new, but it's kind of similar to this story.
8/11/2011 c31 dotwiper
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! bianca is back! and Im starting to like loki, he's pretty nice since he turned sides x)
also, something's really wierd with crystal, wonder what's with her :
and, I love the random moments when ashton decides to pay a visit :D
awesome chapter!
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
ps. also, I'm sorry that I can't review as frequent as i'd like to, I'll be dropping one every time i'll have some time to spare ^-^ *i do love this story, I'm just really busy :
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! bianca is back! and Im starting to like loki, he's pretty nice since he turned sides x)
also, something's really wierd with crystal, wonder what's with her :
and, I love the random moments when ashton decides to pay a visit :D
awesome chapter!
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
ps. also, I'm sorry that I can't review as frequent as i'd like to, I'll be dropping one every time i'll have some time to spare ^-^ *i do love this story, I'm just really busy :
8/11/2011 c30 dotwiper
sorry, felt to lazy to log in xD
I love the dark pieces of this chapter, you should do more of those, it suits this story more somehow ^-^ oh yea, the idea of taking his left eye is good, since it's somehow.. well.. I don't know, just really fitting for an exchange i guess xD
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
sorry, felt to lazy to log in xD
I love the dark pieces of this chapter, you should do more of those, it suits this story more somehow ^-^ oh yea, the idea of taking his left eye is good, since it's somehow.. well.. I don't know, just really fitting for an exchange i guess xD
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
8/3/2011 c27 1Elemental Pen 29
This is my favorite part:
"Simpson street... antidote... important," Lillie muttered. Zarik frowned.
"Is that the show with the yellow people? Are you trying to discover the yellow people?" Zarik questioned
I can just imagine the tone in Zarik's voice as he's saying this, still it's great for the story.
Keep writing!~
1Elemental Pen 29This is my favorite part:
"Simpson street... antidote... important," Lillie muttered. Zarik frowned.
"Is that the show with the yellow people? Are you trying to discover the yellow people?" Zarik questioned
I can just imagine the tone in Zarik's voice as he's saying this, still it's great for the story.
Keep writing!~
7/29/2011 c26 Dotwiper
poor lillie :O aaaaah her insides are becoming gooey xO lol. the sarcasm is just too awesome :D
dang that kid was scary, the one who captured Ethan and Crystal O_O
well, keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
poor lillie :O aaaaah her insides are becoming gooey xO lol. the sarcasm is just too awesome :D
dang that kid was scary, the one who captured Ethan and Crystal O_O
well, keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
7/13/2011 c27 5ghost graffiti
You should consider using commas more; my advice is to go look up when to use them.
5ghost graffitiYou should consider using commas more; my advice is to go look up when to use them.
7/12/2011 c26 1Elemental Pen 29
26 chapters and it only feels like the begining of the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
1Elemental Pen 2926 chapters and it only feels like the begining of the story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/7/2011 c24 Dotwiper
YEA MAN WHERE IS ZARIK! :O
damn good chapter! hahaha, well i'm quite happy that you didn't ditch this story after a few chapters :)
whaaattt? did Bianca turn those poor immortal hunters into porclein dolls? O_O that's scary.
NOOOO! what'll happen too Lillie? and what'll happen if she fights without drinking blood? i wanna find out!
now keep up with the good work! i love it when you update fast! :D
~ dotwiper
YEA MAN WHERE IS ZARIK! :O
damn good chapter! hahaha, well i'm quite happy that you didn't ditch this story after a few chapters :)
whaaattt? did Bianca turn those poor immortal hunters into porclein dolls? O_O that's scary.
NOOOO! what'll happen too Lillie? and what'll happen if she fights without drinking blood? i wanna find out!
now keep up with the good work! i love it when you update fast! :D
~ dotwiper
7/7/2011 c23 Dotwiper
oh ggosh. Bianca really creeps me out! O_O
oh no Ashton! you've got it all wrong!
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
oh ggosh. Bianca really creeps me out! O_O
oh no Ashton! you've got it all wrong!
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper