for Discontinued Version of Tainted Blood7/7/2011 c22 Dotwiper
WAAAAAAH! it's so cute when Lillie is all weak! mind me, i was all like 'hell yea!' when she fell and zarik caught her :P you should have more of that stuff :D
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
ps. i really love this story! if you need anything, like guidance or whatever, dont hesitate to pm me :) i only offer that to VERY few people :)
WAAAAAAH! it's so cute when Lillie is all weak! mind me, i was all like 'hell yea!' when she fell and zarik caught her :P you should have more of that stuff :D
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
ps. i really love this story! if you need anything, like guidance or whatever, dont hesitate to pm me :) i only offer that to VERY few people :)
7/6/2011 c23 
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For a minute, I thought the dolls were vodo dolls. Bianca will be a creepy character indeed...
1Elemental Pen 29For a minute, I thought the dolls were vodo dolls. Bianca will be a creepy character indeed...
6/28/2011 c21 Elemental Pen 29
I wonder how long Stark will last with that vampyre's scythe/blade weapon. And the conversation has changed back to Guardians.
Oh and I loved that line when Zarik said "Hey! Don't put words in my mouth. I never said that." It almost made the conversation of Guardians seem like a normal thing.
I wonder how long Stark will last with that vampyre's scythe/blade weapon. And the conversation has changed back to Guardians.
Oh and I loved that line when Zarik said "Hey! Don't put words in my mouth. I never said that." It almost made the conversation of Guardians seem like a normal thing.
6/28/2011 c21 Dotwiper
awesome chapter!
everyone has a writer's block from time to time, just please
don't give up on this story, i'd be very sad if you did.. i
really really love it :D
that bianca girl kindof creeps me out, she's really smug.
someone i really love is Caleb 3 !
also that Zarik seems to be a good guy, so i'll like him too :)
HAHA LMAO *caleb gets caught looking like he's trying to rape
the vampire* awkward? xD
oh Lillie and her unending mercifulness, she's too nice, Alana
and Ren gets to stay ey? that's really intresting, wonder what
Ren will think about it.
Oh my, seems like hell really wants to get their claws on Lillie,
watch out girl! well, she's got Caleb on her side so x) ;)
anyway, excellent chapter! keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
awesome chapter!
everyone has a writer's block from time to time, just please
don't give up on this story, i'd be very sad if you did.. i
really really love it :D
that bianca girl kindof creeps me out, she's really smug.
someone i really love is Caleb 3 !
also that Zarik seems to be a good guy, so i'll like him too :)
HAHA LMAO *caleb gets caught looking like he's trying to rape
the vampire* awkward? xD
oh Lillie and her unending mercifulness, she's too nice, Alana
and Ren gets to stay ey? that's really intresting, wonder what
Ren will think about it.
Oh my, seems like hell really wants to get their claws on Lillie,
watch out girl! well, she's got Caleb on her side so x) ;)
anyway, excellent chapter! keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
6/27/2011 c20 Dotwiper
WHAAAO! awesome chapter!
kaden vs caleb - oooh sweet triumph :D kaden's a cocky brat as far as i know x) but whaao, they really whacked lillies house.
stark vs sebastian - my my.. i feel really sorry for both of them, though i feel that stark is a better person than he appears to be. as for sebastian, man, that poor guy certainly didn't deserve that... but all well now, more or less.
Hope that Lillie will accept that her human friends should still tag along, it would be for the best anyway, they are still accepting her as she is after all..
well, awesome chapters, sorry it took me such time to review, i'm just kindof busy nowadays x)
keep up with the good work! :D ~ dotwiper
WHAAAO! awesome chapter!
kaden vs caleb - oooh sweet triumph :D kaden's a cocky brat as far as i know x) but whaao, they really whacked lillies house.
stark vs sebastian - my my.. i feel really sorry for both of them, though i feel that stark is a better person than he appears to be. as for sebastian, man, that poor guy certainly didn't deserve that... but all well now, more or less.
Hope that Lillie will accept that her human friends should still tag along, it would be for the best anyway, they are still accepting her as she is after all..
well, awesome chapters, sorry it took me such time to review, i'm just kindof busy nowadays x)
keep up with the good work! :D ~ dotwiper
6/27/2011 c19 Dotwiper
i kindof feel sorry for both Sebastian and Stark, they've both gone through some dark times.. hope ´no one of them has to die anytime soom..
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
i kindof feel sorry for both Sebastian and Stark, they've both gone through some dark times.. hope ´no one of them has to die anytime soom..
keep up with the good work! ~ dotwiper
6/27/2011 c17 Dotwiper
awesome chapter! loads of action and intresting events :)
love Caleb~
keep up with the good work!~ dotwiper
awesome chapter! loads of action and intresting events :)
love Caleb~
keep up with the good work!~ dotwiper
6/26/2011 c20 Elemental Pen 29
All I can say is that I agree with the end note. Still Lillie's house is demolished so I wonder how she's going to get it fixed...
All I can say is that I agree with the end note. Still Lillie's house is demolished so I wonder how she's going to get it fixed...
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Caleb's having fun because it's fun to turn people aka Kaden into swiss cheese with a gun. Still he can't kill him...
Caleb's having fun because it's fun to turn people aka Kaden into swiss cheese with a gun. Still he can't kill him...
6/26/2011 c18 Elemental Pen 29
Well, I enjoyed the chapter. I was actually convinced Riley was going to turn into a zombie before Tobias yelled at him.
Well, I enjoyed the chapter. I was actually convinced Riley was going to turn into a zombie before Tobias yelled at him.
6/15/2011 c16 4Rihimesama
I think it is awsome! I really hope you countine to finish the story. It's really suspenceful. PLEASE cotinue.
4RihimesamaI think it is awsome! I really hope you countine to finish the story. It's really suspenceful. PLEASE cotinue.
6/14/2011 c15 1Elemental Pen 29
This reminds me of Vampire Princess Miyu with the relationship between Lillie and Stark.
1Elemental Pen 29This reminds me of Vampire Princess Miyu with the relationship between Lillie and Stark.
6/14/2011 c14 Dotwiper
HAHAHA epic - " Sebastian, that new kid, he's a vampire!"*ethan* HAHAHA omh i love him! everyone suspicious is a vampire to him. so does this mean that they know about lillies secret? and will lillie allow them to stay in her world despite the danger? :P
~ dotwiper :D
HAHAHA epic - " Sebastian, that new kid, he's a vampire!"*ethan* HAHAHA omh i love him! everyone suspicious is a vampire to him. so does this mean that they know about lillies secret? and will lillie allow them to stay in her world despite the danger? :P
~ dotwiper :D
6/14/2011 c13 Dotwiper
KYAAH! *fangirl mode* I LOVE CALEB! he's awesome! he's tough guy outside, but has something that resembles soft inside :D
~dotwiper
KYAAH! *fangirl mode* I LOVE CALEB! he's awesome! he's tough guy outside, but has something that resembles soft inside :D
~dotwiper