for Discontinued Version of Tainted Blood6/14/2011 c15 Dotwiper
KYAAAHH! omg! superultramegaawesome! so much action, but this chapter reveiled starks a bit mean nature. now i'm curious about why he chose to stay by Lillie :O
hm, i wonder who this Z guy is, and tobias is a suspicious guy too..
anyway, keep up with the good work! ~dotwiper
KYAAAHH! omg! superultramegaawesome! so much action, but this chapter reveiled starks a bit mean nature. now i'm curious about why he chose to stay by Lillie :O
hm, i wonder who this Z guy is, and tobias is a suspicious guy too..
anyway, keep up with the good work! ~dotwiper
6/5/2011 c11 Dotwiper
WAAAH! Lillie and her mercifulness :D she spared Alana, omg i absolutely love her!
Now about Stark, I don't know a bit about his power, maybe some of it will be reveiled in this fight.. well, just have to say that your storyline and it's development is just way too awesome :D:D:D:D! soo creative!
keep up with the good work! ~ Dotwiper
WAAAH! Lillie and her mercifulness :D she spared Alana, omg i absolutely love her!
Now about Stark, I don't know a bit about his power, maybe some of it will be reveiled in this fight.. well, just have to say that your storyline and it's development is just way too awesome :D:D:D:D! soo creative!
keep up with the good work! ~ Dotwiper
6/5/2011 c10 Dotwiper
HOLY SHOOT! man i've longed to see Lillies real powers! really awesome! i feel kindof sorry for Alana,.
HOLY SHOOT! man i've longed to see Lillies real powers! really awesome! i feel kindof sorry for Alana,.
1/16/2011 c9 Dotwiper
good chapter, poor Lillie! I wonder what happened to her.. I still want to know more about her and Starks relationship, Stark is a walking mystery!
Btw - totally hilarious when Lillies human buddies relised that they actually don't know much about her xD
Great that you could upload another chapter so soon, keep up with the good work! - Dotwiper
good chapter, poor Lillie! I wonder what happened to her.. I still want to know more about her and Starks relationship, Stark is a walking mystery!
Btw - totally hilarious when Lillies human buddies relised that they actually don't know much about her xD
Great that you could upload another chapter so soon, keep up with the good work! - Dotwiper
1/14/2011 c8 Dotwiper
! can't wait til the next chapter, wonder what Ashton did to Lillie. You updated pretty fast, praise 4 that :D:D:D
-Dotwiper
! can't wait til the next chapter, wonder what Ashton did to Lillie. You updated pretty fast, praise 4 that :D:D:D
-Dotwiper
1/14/2011 c7 Dotwiper
OMG how exciting! i like the werewolf :3 btw, does Lillie has any other demon powers or is it going to be a surprise? :D
- Dotwiper
OMG how exciting! i like the werewolf :3 btw, does Lillie has any other demon powers or is it going to be a surprise? :D
- Dotwiper
1/11/2011 c2 WindTear
I just read Chapter one and I'm already in love with the story! Keep up the great work! ^_^
-WindTear
I just read Chapter one and I'm already in love with the story! Keep up the great work! ^_^
-WindTear
1/8/2011 c6 Dotwiper
hope you can upload soon! i really like this story :D it's quite intresting, even though the chapters are quite short, but it's still well done!
keep up with the good work ~ Dotwiper
hope you can upload soon! i really like this story :D it's quite intresting, even though the chapters are quite short, but it's still well done!
keep up with the good work ~ Dotwiper
1/8/2011 c3 Dotwiper
awesome! REALLY intresting! i wonder how things will develop, your writing skills are amazing :D
- Dotwiper
awesome! REALLY intresting! i wonder how things will develop, your writing skills are amazing :D
- Dotwiper
1/8/2011 c2 Dotwiper
wow! cool writing skills! now i really like this story. I'll comtinur reading. - This chapter was more like an intreduction with the caracters, like you mentioned.
Anyway , keep up with the good work! :D
good regards - Dotwiper
wow! cool writing skills! now i really like this story. I'll comtinur reading. - This chapter was more like an intreduction with the caracters, like you mentioned.
Anyway , keep up with the good work! :D
good regards - Dotwiper
1/8/2011 c1 Dotwiper
Cool beginning, short chapter, but really good :) wonder what'll happen next. Stark is a bit mysterious, i like that.
- Dotwiper :]
Cool beginning, short chapter, but really good :) wonder what'll happen next. Stark is a bit mysterious, i like that.
- Dotwiper :]
1/3/2011 c2 
2Orange Muffins
Hmm... Will there be more action in the next chapie? O.o I hope so! :3 When, I first read this chapter I was a little confused... But, as soon as I read further my stories, my answers were answered. Though, I was wondering if Lillie is a demon, why is she attending a school with humans? Nice chapter 2 by the way, off to chapter 3 then... :D Also, if you have free time too, feel free to check my story "A Demon Wearing A Mask", and review it as well? Thank you :D
2Orange MuffinsHmm... Will there be more action in the next chapie? O.o I hope so! :3 When, I first read this chapter I was a little confused... But, as soon as I read further my stories, my answers were answered. Though, I was wondering if Lillie is a demon, why is she attending a school with humans? Nice chapter 2 by the way, off to chapter 3 then... :D Also, if you have free time too, feel free to check my story "A Demon Wearing A Mask", and review it as well? Thank you :D