for Discontinued Version of Tainted Blood3/11/2012 c95 Victoria
OMG, someone save Riku please! I just luv him so much! Don't kill him...I beg you. Yeah, he means that much to me. I NEVER beg.
Go Lillie! Kick Stark in the nuts or something!
Why do I suddenly feel sympathy for him?
OMG, someone save Riku please! I just luv him so much! Don't kill him...I beg you. Yeah, he means that much to me. I NEVER beg.
Go Lillie! Kick Stark in the nuts or something!
Why do I suddenly feel sympathy for him?
3/10/2012 c94 Caramel
I kinda feel bad for Stark . . . all that just to help someone . . . you really are a sweetie!
I'll kill you if you kill Riku (death glare) he's my fav. No kill Riku. No, no, NO!
I kinda feel bad for Stark . . . all that just to help someone . . . you really are a sweetie!
I'll kill you if you kill Riku (death glare) he's my fav. No kill Riku. No, no, NO!
3/10/2012 c94 Shelly
I'm pretty sure that Lillie isn't the full Hellraine... since you once noted that Lillie had healed Caleb with the power of Gods. And . . . I wonder . . . what will Loki do once he's finished off Valentia? Stay with Lillie or maybe btray her like Stark once did?
Glad to have you back, Stark!
DON'T DIE, RIKU!
I'm pretty sure that Lillie isn't the full Hellraine... since you once noted that Lillie had healed Caleb with the power of Gods. And . . . I wonder . . . what will Loki do once he's finished off Valentia? Stay with Lillie or maybe btray her like Stark once did?
Glad to have you back, Stark!
DON'T DIE, RIKU!
3/9/2012 c93 Shelly
Yeah, you sure as hell were too arrogant. Good to see you've learned your lesson . . . or not.
Is Stark really as strong as he seems? And, would he really switch back to the good side and forget Valentia?
Lillie, you're back! Meet your long lost brother, Jaycie!
Lillie: Hi . . . Jaycie? What the hell? Who named you?
Jayce: My name is Jayce
Me: And I don't care
Don't kill Riku. Please don't. Marik, Stark, Auryn, Lillie anyone save him. I don't care if its that bitch Valentia. Just . . . please save him.
Yeah, you sure as hell were too arrogant. Good to see you've learned your lesson . . . or not.
Is Stark really as strong as he seems? And, would he really switch back to the good side and forget Valentia?
Lillie, you're back! Meet your long lost brother, Jaycie!
Lillie: Hi . . . Jaycie? What the hell? Who named you?
Jayce: My name is Jayce
Me: And I don't care
Don't kill Riku. Please don't. Marik, Stark, Auryn, Lillie anyone save him. I don't care if its that bitch Valentia. Just . . . please save him.
3/9/2012 c93 Maya
THAT'S RIGHT, STARKY! U REALLY SCREWED UP THIS TIME!
Who's Lillie's father? I wanna meet him . . . (Starts whining like a baby)
Dog? DOG? HOW DARE YOU CALL MY PRECIOUS RIKU A FREAKING DOG! If you want a dog, go to Caleb.
Kay, I don't get how Jayce is a God and Lillie is a Hellraine. Shouldn't they both be gods or Hellraines? That just reminds me, you said Lillie once healed Caleb with the power that belonged to Gods... Was Lillie and Jayce's father a god?
THAT'S RIGHT, STARKY! U REALLY SCREWED UP THIS TIME!
Who's Lillie's father? I wanna meet him . . . (Starts whining like a baby)
Dog? DOG? HOW DARE YOU CALL MY PRECIOUS RIKU A FREAKING DOG! If you want a dog, go to Caleb.
Kay, I don't get how Jayce is a God and Lillie is a Hellraine. Shouldn't they both be gods or Hellraines? That just reminds me, you said Lillie once healed Caleb with the power that belonged to Gods... Was Lillie and Jayce's father a god?
3/8/2012 c9 
11Naomi Chick
So far, I'm really enjoying the story. I like the way everyone of the character is uniquely different. My favorite is Stark with his quirky personality.
11Naomi ChickSo far, I'm really enjoying the story. I like the way everyone of the character is uniquely different. My favorite is Stark with his quirky personality.
3/8/2012 c92 Maya
"Try that shit again, and we'll see who gets hacked into pieces."
Yeah, protect Lillie, Jayce! Show a little brotherly affection!
:)
Update like really soon!
"Try that shit again, and we'll see who gets hacked into pieces."
Yeah, protect Lillie, Jayce! Show a little brotherly affection!
:)
Update like really soon!
3/8/2012 c92 Shelly
Hanna seems like a weakling with a big mouth . . .
Seriously.
Lillie, why on Earth would you go after a total stranger when you have two hot guys on the surface fighting for you? Jeez, sometimes I wonder . . .
Love it!
Hanna seems like a weakling with a big mouth . . .
Seriously.
Lillie, why on Earth would you go after a total stranger when you have two hot guys on the surface fighting for you? Jeez, sometimes I wonder . . .
Love it!
3/8/2012 c92 Collisa
Stark is . . . a total bastard. He would have to do A LOT of things to make the hate I feel for him disappear. Like, run up to Lillie and kiss her or something. That would work.
Don't make Riku die or loose his life! I like him! He's my fav next to Loki!
Stark is . . . a total bastard. He would have to do A LOT of things to make the hate I feel for him disappear. Like, run up to Lillie and kiss her or something. That would work.
Don't make Riku die or loose his life! I like him! He's my fav next to Loki!
3/7/2012 c91 Kayla
DON'T DIE RIKU!
DON'T DIE RIKU!
3/7/2012 c91 Vistoria
Valentia is a toatl beyotch.
I HATE STARK! FORGET THE FACT THAT HE'S LIKE TOTALLY SUPER CUTE AND THAT I'M A SUCKER FOR GREEN EYES!
He sucks ass.
I like Loki waaayyy better. At least he stays true to his words. I hate decieving guys.
Valentia is a toatl beyotch.
I HATE STARK! FORGET THE FACT THAT HE'S LIKE TOTALLY SUPER CUTE AND THAT I'M A SUCKER FOR GREEN EYES!
He sucks ass.
I like Loki waaayyy better. At least he stays true to his words. I hate decieving guys.
3/7/2012 c91 Caramel
Valentia should go fie in a hole. Stark should hit himself on the back of his head and put some ice on him and THINK THINGS THROUGH!
Why can't Lillie and Loki go out? They would be a great couple! :)3
Valentia should go fie in a hole. Stark should hit himself on the back of his head and put some ice on him and THINK THINGS THROUGH!
Why can't Lillie and Loki go out? They would be a great couple! :)3
3/7/2012 c91 Shelly
"Have you two ever considered going out?"
WHY NOT?
Lillie+Loki sounds soo super cute!
"Have you two ever considered going out?"
WHY NOT?
Lillie+Loki sounds soo super cute!
3/3/2012 c90 Shelly
Hmm, I like Hanna since she's smart. But no way is she getting her hands on any of Lillie's Guardian's hearts. I don't really think you'll make Loki and Caleb care about her that much or even as a friend, but please don't pay so much attention to her! She can make smart remarks to make me crack up, but Lillie's the center of attention! She can go die under a truck! Oops, she's demon, the truck won't crush her . . .
DON'T KILL RIKU! NO WAY! MARIK, STOP HIM FROM DOING SOMETHING SO STUPID! RIKU, YOU HAVE A LIFE, DON'T WASTE IT! Lillie's just going to feel depressed and guilty if you sacrifice yourself...fool. sob, sob. UPDATE SOON!
Hmm, I like Hanna since she's smart. But no way is she getting her hands on any of Lillie's Guardian's hearts. I don't really think you'll make Loki and Caleb care about her that much or even as a friend, but please don't pay so much attention to her! She can make smart remarks to make me crack up, but Lillie's the center of attention! She can go die under a truck! Oops, she's demon, the truck won't crush her . . .
DON'T KILL RIKU! NO WAY! MARIK, STOP HIM FROM DOING SOMETHING SO STUPID! RIKU, YOU HAVE A LIFE, DON'T WASTE IT! Lillie's just going to feel depressed and guilty if you sacrifice yourself...fool. sob, sob. UPDATE SOON!
3/3/2012 c90 Victoria
Lillie's cracked? HAHAHA. Nah, just kidding. I know she isn't really 'cracked'.
Pwease don kill Wiku! (A bit of baby-ness in there)
I love him! Please, please don't kill him! I will stalk you down and haunt you in your dreams if you do!
Kidding. Just please don't.
Caleb, you're such a sweetie!
Hanna's kinda likable, and as long as she doesn't get too close to any of Lillie's guardians, she'll be fine. I mean, I like to think of Lillie as the baby. Caleb, Stark, Loki, and Riku are like the protective mama bears. If someone shows up and decides that she should be the one everyone loves, then the story's screwed and Lillie's washed away. Update soon!
Lillie's cracked? HAHAHA. Nah, just kidding. I know she isn't really 'cracked'.
Pwease don kill Wiku! (A bit of baby-ness in there)
I love him! Please, please don't kill him! I will stalk you down and haunt you in your dreams if you do!
Kidding. Just please don't.
Caleb, you're such a sweetie!
Hanna's kinda likable, and as long as she doesn't get too close to any of Lillie's guardians, she'll be fine. I mean, I like to think of Lillie as the baby. Caleb, Stark, Loki, and Riku are like the protective mama bears. If someone shows up and decides that she should be the one everyone loves, then the story's screwed and Lillie's washed away. Update soon!