for Bibbity Bobbity ZIT3/19/2012 c1 Lidiu
This charming little one shot gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.
I can totally relate to Alison.A zit appearing on the most innapropiate time it`s really quite daunting.Like at a date with a super hot guy and you always have the impression that everybody is starring at it.The confidence is lost and all you want to do is go home.
Been there,done that.
All that prepping and self-motivation as useless as tits on a boar.Quite depressing,really.
You managed to put yourself into your character`s shoes.She is in eight grade and you captured exactly how an eight grader acts and thinks.The interaction between the sisters is endearing.
Love Alison`s wit.
This charming little one shot gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.
I can totally relate to Alison.A zit appearing on the most innapropiate time it`s really quite daunting.Like at a date with a super hot guy and you always have the impression that everybody is starring at it.The confidence is lost and all you want to do is go home.
Been there,done that.
All that prepping and self-motivation as useless as tits on a boar.Quite depressing,really.
You managed to put yourself into your character`s shoes.She is in eight grade and you captured exactly how an eight grader acts and thinks.The interaction between the sisters is endearing.
Love Alison`s wit.
12/6/2010 c1 the0z3452
i can totally relate to this. my little sister always thinks our parents like me more than her. but, in reality, they can just relate to me better. I've always been more 'grown up' than most kids, and because of that me and my parents can get along better. but, as sisters, we stick together no matter what. and no one could ever change that.
i can totally relate to this. my little sister always thinks our parents like me more than her. but, in reality, they can just relate to me better. I've always been more 'grown up' than most kids, and because of that me and my parents can get along better. but, as sisters, we stick together no matter what. and no one could ever change that.
10/8/2010 c1 Datarin
Well written considering the personal perspective bias from the main character.
In light of recent nightmares, I have to admit I didn't enjoy it though (my appetite for adolescent ramblings have dropped to negative levels). Someone else definitely will.
Well written considering the personal perspective bias from the main character.
In light of recent nightmares, I have to admit I didn't enjoy it though (my appetite for adolescent ramblings have dropped to negative levels). Someone else definitely will.