
7/11/2013 c33
1Sky.Fay
This was just as awesome as Cupid's Granddaughter, I like both of them equally overall, but I like them differently in different area's (if that makes sense?). I really enjoy Peyton barging into people's houses, she makes me laugh. I read this in one night because I wanted to read Roman Roommate and I saw that you suggested to read this (I realize that you didn't say that the reader necessarily needed to read it, but I like your writing so I figured it would be a good decision). Another thing, I realized halfway through this thing that Brooke and Sean are both in their forties during this book. I have no idea why it took me long... Anyway, I'm sure you'll find a review similar to this on Roman Roommate soon so... :D smileyfacebeacuseihavenothingelsetowriteyay

This was just as awesome as Cupid's Granddaughter, I like both of them equally overall, but I like them differently in different area's (if that makes sense?). I really enjoy Peyton barging into people's houses, she makes me laugh. I read this in one night because I wanted to read Roman Roommate and I saw that you suggested to read this (I realize that you didn't say that the reader necessarily needed to read it, but I like your writing so I figured it would be a good decision). Another thing, I realized halfway through this thing that Brooke and Sean are both in their forties during this book. I have no idea why it took me long... Anyway, I'm sure you'll find a review similar to this on Roman Roommate soon so... :D smileyfacebeacuseihavenothingelsetowriteyay
6/17/2013 c9 Guest
Pirulina here. I hope this post actually posts. I know you already wrote this but I just want to say I hope there's some jealousy with Jason and Logan about "Vee".
Pirulina here. I hope this post actually posts. I know you already wrote this but I just want to say I hope there's some jealousy with Jason and Logan about "Vee".
5/20/2013 c3
1DuchessYappingDog
I have really enjoying reading your stories. I have seen your stories, especially Cupid's Granddaughter, around while browsing for a long time, but I never checked it out because for some reason I have trouble getting into fantasy and mythical type stories. I'm really glad I gave it a try! Now I'm starting on this one! :)

I have really enjoying reading your stories. I have seen your stories, especially Cupid's Granddaughter, around while browsing for a long time, but I never checked it out because for some reason I have trouble getting into fantasy and mythical type stories. I'm really glad I gave it a try! Now I'm starting on this one! :)
10/23/2012 c33 Anonymous
I love this story. (I felt it was better than Cupid's Granddaughter - your writing has improved!) And I liked the little nods back to Cupid's Granddaughter.
I love this story. (I felt it was better than Cupid's Granddaughter - your writing has improved!) And I liked the little nods back to Cupid's Granddaughter.
8/11/2012 c29
10cherrypiesizzle
I don't know...I feel like Avena is a bit of a flat character. She's a bit of a disappointment after reading Peyton's story. I'm sorry that I feel this way, but I never felt like she developed into a concrete, strong character for me. Rather, her actions annoyed me more than anything else.

I don't know...I feel like Avena is a bit of a flat character. She's a bit of a disappointment after reading Peyton's story. I'm sorry that I feel this way, but I never felt like she developed into a concrete, strong character for me. Rather, her actions annoyed me more than anything else.
6/24/2012 c32 OPatron
wow! another fantastic story! okay, im going to go read the rest of the series now :)
wow! another fantastic story! okay, im going to go read the rest of the series now :)
6/20/2012 c32
9XiaoChuChu
I don't know what to say, except for the same I said about Cupid's Granddaughter:
Loved it. The story, the characters, everything. Well written, funny, cute, romantic and origianl. Loved it alot :)

I don't know what to say, except for the same I said about Cupid's Granddaughter:
Loved it. The story, the characters, everything. Well written, funny, cute, romantic and origianl. Loved it alot :)
3/8/2012 c32
16non.graceful
From the beginning to the end, you wrote beautifully. I liked your ideas shown within this piece but I felt as if you did not show Logan and Vee's relationship progressing properly.
Still, Cupids Granddaughter is my favourite!

From the beginning to the end, you wrote beautifully. I liked your ideas shown within this piece but I felt as if you did not show Logan and Vee's relationship progressing properly.
Still, Cupids Granddaughter is my favourite!
1/1/2012 c22
1forlorndevotion6
I just wanted to say how funny it is how I've decided to start reading this story on the first day of the year, and in this chapter you say happy new year if it is appropriate xD just found that funny lol
but while I'm here...wonderful story. just...fantastic. I read cupids granddaughter before this and I just...LOVE your writing! :D keep up the beautiful work

I just wanted to say how funny it is how I've decided to start reading this story on the first day of the year, and in this chapter you say happy new year if it is appropriate xD just found that funny lol
but while I'm here...wonderful story. just...fantastic. I read cupids granddaughter before this and I just...LOVE your writing! :D keep up the beautiful work
11/8/2011 c1 Anon
Avena means 'oatmeal' in Spanish.
Avena means 'oatmeal' in Spanish.