1/11/2011 c11 6Curlysquirt95
The ending was sad, but your story was really good. :) I can't wait to read your next one. I want to vote in your poll, but I can't find it on your profile page.
The ending was sad, but your story was really good. :) I can't wait to read your next one. I want to vote in your poll, but I can't find it on your profile page.
1/11/2011 c10 Curlysquirt95
Anya died? Seriously? This story is heartbreaking, I didn't want her to die! (If anyone should've died it should've been Jason, he was sometimes a jerk to Anya.) This was a great chapter, can't wait to read more! :)
Anya died? Seriously? This story is heartbreaking, I didn't want her to die! (If anyone should've died it should've been Jason, he was sometimes a jerk to Anya.) This was a great chapter, can't wait to read more! :)
1/8/2011 c8 Curlysquirt95
Wow! Great chapter! I hope Anya isn't seriously ill or something! Update soon! :)
Wow! Great chapter! I hope Anya isn't seriously ill or something! Update soon! :)
12/21/2010 c7 7joker09
I'm so sorry that I'm late for reviewing!
I'm grieved to hear that the mom died, but maybe then she'll get live an easier life. And I'm glad to hear that Anya and Jason is back together:) Of course, Jason would have to watch himself from doing anything rash again.
By the way, you have to let Katherine show out more throughout this story at some point! I love the adorable-ness.^^
I'm so sorry that I'm late for reviewing!
I'm grieved to hear that the mom died, but maybe then she'll get live an easier life. And I'm glad to hear that Anya and Jason is back together:) Of course, Jason would have to watch himself from doing anything rash again.
By the way, you have to let Katherine show out more throughout this story at some point! I love the adorable-ness.^^
12/13/2010 c7 6Curlysquirt95
This was a good, yet sad, chapter. I find myself yearning for some romance... :) Update soon!
This was a good, yet sad, chapter. I find myself yearning for some romance... :) Update soon!
12/7/2010 c6 7joker09
How do I say it... The explanation was kinda angular, I suppose. I can see why you said this chapter was very hard to write...;)
I can totally see why Jason would come up with that kind of plan to make Anya jealous, but I didn't think Anya would force herself to marry with him. I think she would've held it in and kept it to herself. Was I supposed to interpert that from the passages?:)
Even though you said it was hard to write, I was able to enjoy it this time like always. Keep it up Agent!
How do I say it... The explanation was kinda angular, I suppose. I can see why you said this chapter was very hard to write...;)
I can totally see why Jason would come up with that kind of plan to make Anya jealous, but I didn't think Anya would force herself to marry with him. I think she would've held it in and kept it to herself. Was I supposed to interpert that from the passages?:)
Even though you said it was hard to write, I was able to enjoy it this time like always. Keep it up Agent!
12/5/2010 c6 6Curlysquirt95
This was a really good chapter. But, I really don't think Jason is good for Anya. Fool Anya once, shame on Jason. Fool Anya twice, it's shame on her. She should find someone else... Update soon! :)
This was a really good chapter. But, I really don't think Jason is good for Anya. Fool Anya once, shame on Jason. Fool Anya twice, it's shame on her. She should find someone else... Update soon! :)
11/29/2010 c5 Curlysquirt95
Fantastic chapter!
And there's one little error I found: "Anya look horrible, Jason later recounted." You should probably change 'look' to 'looked'.
Please update soon! :)
Fantastic chapter!
And there's one little error I found: "Anya look horrible, Jason later recounted." You should probably change 'look' to 'looked'.
Please update soon! :)
11/8/2010 c4 Curlysquirt95
I love this chapter! I especially like the description of Anya lost in thought. "Wind blew in her face, blowing her hair around her, twisting it in front and behind her face. She was oblivious to the crowd around her calling out to each other and her. Anya ignored them, inside her own silent world."
And thanks for mentioning me. :)
I love this chapter! I especially like the description of Anya lost in thought. "Wind blew in her face, blowing her hair around her, twisting it in front and behind her face. She was oblivious to the crowd around her calling out to each other and her. Anya ignored them, inside her own silent world."
And thanks for mentioning me. :)
11/6/2010 c4 Known as Agent M
Um, sorry that my reviewing was late. But here I am, now planning to go off with words.
So, it was Anya's father chasing her and trying to kill her with a knife? Goodness, that's an awful man right there. By the way, there wasn't anything about her mother(I think) but are you planning to write something about her? Because I'm quite curious about her. Oh, and whether Anya had any siblings too:)
The idea of the mirror hallway was fabulous! Although I'm not sure if I want to walk through that place during the night... Hey, by the way, Jason's a sweet guy. You just gotta love him. Lol
Um, sorry that my reviewing was late. But here I am, now planning to go off with words.
So, it was Anya's father chasing her and trying to kill her with a knife? Goodness, that's an awful man right there. By the way, there wasn't anything about her mother(I think) but are you planning to write something about her? Because I'm quite curious about her. Oh, and whether Anya had any siblings too:)
The idea of the mirror hallway was fabulous! Although I'm not sure if I want to walk through that place during the night... Hey, by the way, Jason's a sweet guy. You just gotta love him. Lol
11/6/2010 c4 Admins Pls Delete Me
Wow I love this! I like the way you put it together with switching point of views. The detail you put into is great! Great job!
Wow I love this! I like the way you put it together with switching point of views. The detail you put into is great! Great job!